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Freaky Friday Gone Wrong
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"I hate you and i wish you were never my sister. you would never understand what misery means because you have such a perfect life". Ayra screamed furiously.
Alice told herself not to think about the word "hate" which her sister had used on her ,people said things they didn't mean when they were angry she consoled herself.
"You think my life is perfect? well be my guest I wish you my perfect life, I hope you would walk in my perfect shoes ."
"Whatever" ayra muttered walking away.
"That's what you always do walk away, shy away from confrontations for crying out loud you are the intelligent one ,mom is always proud of you I mean everyone speaks highly of you .The perfect life you accuse me of you are the one that actually has the fucking perfect life".
Ayra turned around and was surprised to see the amount of pain on her sister 's face, for the first time ever Alice wasn't wearing a bored expression but she ignored it, it could be one of her trump trick and said "Christ you are so sick to think that".
" Maybe I am ".
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Good start! High recommend, I didn't read much, but With whats on the table, the future looks good.
Hi Author!! I love your boom 🎀💕 I guess im everywhere hehe 🤭 So i def love your story line it nice, and ypu potray each emotions quite well!! A quick advice, when a character is talking could you use this a quotation mark, i got confused 🥲 Just like this “Hi im alice” she said Use this so we wont get confused Keep up the good work
it's a really nice book with an awesome storyline. it's truly amazing, but I believe you can do better with more effort.
The overall plot is okay. I'm actually intrigued by the characters. There's obviously so much more to Alice than what meets the eyes. Author you've done a great job crafting all the amazing characters in this amazing story and I can't wait to find out more about them.
So far the chapters are short but it's okay for a new author, just try to keep up witj frequent updates 😎📖💐