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First we fell.

Fantasy 95 Chapitres 61.9K Affichage
Auteur: Stivanstin

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Stivastin was made an orphan by the Portals, the promised happy life was stolen from him, he gained a new destiny.

In the world full of Evolveds doing miraculous things, all he ever wanted is to be one of them and escape the hell hole he lived.

But like with the fulfilment of every wish that mattered, there were consequences.

A family.

Brothers, Sisters a doting Mother and a Father, who happens to see the future.

Couple that with High school and girls, add THE single most destructive ability the world has ever seen and voila ..

How the hell is he supposed live a normal life? Get real friends? Go to school trips? Let alone date the girl he likes?

.. not to mention those Portals and the monsters pouring out of them.

This will require some finesse.

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    Stivanstin

    It’s my own work so I’m not going to underrate it. I will take any questions you might have right here and do my best to answer them quickly. All I can say is give it a try. Thanks for reading. PS - I do give myself power stones sometimes for personal reasons. 🙂‍↔️

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    M4s4ki

    I can't tell you how refreshing to read a novel without some silly system or the MC cultivate various flowers and ancient fruit to gain absolute nonsensical powers. The MC seems like a relatable, powerful but not too powerful, the side characters and the world building is nicely done and it's an easy read. I found myself actively wondering where the story will go. For a first novel it's looking good.

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    Asta_Clover_7282

    I like the story so far... but there are many writting errors so do correct them please 🙂

    8mth
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    4r3s
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    Love the story. Few spelling mistakes but its nothing too bad. Wish I could read it ahead but all the same quality stuff, good characters and the world is intriguing, I hope you have some good twists planned.

    8mth
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    DaoistyA9bBi

    Good premises for the plot but so many mistakes Proofread and correct it,then I'll change my review

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