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The ordinary FGO player became the master of Chaldea. What can he do in this chaotic world that doesn't go according to the plot?
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So i will make it short Good idea Great Mechanics However I hope you take it more slow and make the singularities longer for character’s development and stuff I like the Mc but he feels off. Also author you don’t need to update fast take it slow,i feel like the only flaw is writing quality.there is not that much grammar mistakes but the way sentences are formed feels weird
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I'm liking this far. I like the unique on have game from his game appear in the various possible Servants.
First fanfiction, first try. I hope at least someone likes it. I will try to release chapters more often, but I'm definitely not going to abandon my "art". I hope for your understanding and criticism.