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Louis died on Earth due to a truck accident, but he gains a system that tells him he can simulate lives and, in the end, turn those lives into heroes as long as the legend he creates is enough for him to become a heroic spirit. As his first simulation, he becomes a boy named Rémy in France.
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MC's character is not very funny, there is no humor at all, this novel feels really boring to read even though the plot is quite interesting, I feel sleepy while reading this novel.
There is such nonsense in the series that I can't explain. For example, remy can kill an army with one honey, without knowing how to use a spear. After that, they play hide and seek with Jeanne. they are inside the fort and there are probably hundreds of soldiers. but these soldiers are never mentioned. Remy and Jeanne are in a constant flirtation, sometimes in the form of hide-and-seek, sometimes tickling, sometimes making elementary school jokes. This is absurd, considering that they both killed tens of thousands of Englishmen. At a certain point in the novel, Jeanne becomes the commander of the French armies. They want to put him to the test (they want to put the duo of Remy and Jeanne, who have already killed tens of thousands of Brits, to the test). However, two of them are worth the French armies anyway. what are you testing?
The writing is not bad despite the constant flirting which I think the author should tone down a bit. The characters though are a bit lacklustre considering the small amount of information of their backgrounds or thoughts and perspective. As for the World Background... I suggest that the author research about the traditions and cultures of Medieval Europe.
Good idea, bad development. it lacks comedy, less flirting and you need to focus more on supporting characters (considering you have to make up almost all of them I guess it's understandable) the main character is also very flat (but there are worse so it's not that important)
Honestly to me the characters and backgrounds feel very lackluster and pretty much 1 dimensional past the MC and the Jeane being flirty the entire time and although the progression of this story is okay the writing made it feel boring to me so i would recommend the author to work on that especially the side characters (ignoring background characters as they are just a statistic) as they feel like they just have a singular thought in their minds and are pretty contradictory in their writing and another thing I don't like AND ITS THR MOST IMPORTANT ASPECT is the fact it has the "system" tag and the title mentions it being about a system and I have seen no involvement or any popup of a system past chapter 1 but I should say it has a good concept of a life simulator which can help him become gain experience to become different classes of heroic spirit and maybe come a grand but the concept legit never appears and the title is what made me even interested and yet the "life simulation system" never pops up and it's legit hinted to be a "coping mechanism" for him as he thinks everything is simulation as coping but he really knows its and etc and so I actually believe you should work on the story properly maybe go for a rewrite or just change the title and remove some stuff and add some depth and I hope take my criticism properly and actually improve [img=recommend]
if you like to read how an adult behaves like a child and is persuaded by a child, you can safely read this
The novel where the author forgot it was a simulator system and now I'm just confused and unsatisfied with what I read, Like okay we're focusing on the relationship then I'm gonna invest my feelin on that then welp it did not satisfy to say the least, then maybe in the future it would be good. No, just no I don't think I'll read a 100 chapters just so I could satisfy myself with a grater. I'll just go read another fate fanfic with a better story progression than this.
I thought this was like those Chinese fanfictions but this is a disappointment. Let me explain what those are: MC has a simple system that allows him to simulate events in the past though it, and the result is rewriting history by a minor extent that also results in a small pebble being thrown to a pond of water. Now onto the MC. He's dum. Everyone is dum. Makes me wonder how am I supposed to read something that's kinda inconsistent.
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no wonder there are few 1 star reviews . this is total garbage . no one wants to describe it neither do i . it doesn't make any sense
The story is good, but the title and the synopsis are misleading, this should be called reincarnating in Fate as a child in 1430 France, because there is no system really, or the author forgot in the first chapter. In addition, the story at various points becomes very boring, and the mc, even though he is an adult, behaves several times like a child
i was diligenly reading this for the first few chapters since the concept is unique and very interesting. However I find myself skimming the chapters after ch 8-10. The pacing is exrtemely slow and started to get a bit boring for me.
kind of a misleading title, it looks like mc is just reincarnated, falls off a cliff after volume 2 because MC just disappears and a bunch of random characters start doing things no one cares about. it was good before that. it's a testament that author commited the worst sin of all by just no explanation removing mc but still 4 stars. i will let him cook but tbh he been cooking too long.
Overall, it's really good, but it lacks comedy and is getting more boring each chapter to the point where one may even drop it.I would recommend a bit more comedy other than that everything is good to Great
Has alot of room for improvement but im interested to see how the story plays out. Ive seen no spelling mistakes so far but grammar and manner of speech for some characters could be better.
Great Story so far .