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Face-Slapping System
3.98 (47 audimat)
Synopsis
Roland was just a normal college student living peacefully in an H-Grade City when he experienced his very first devastating heartbreak.
He found out that his girlfriend of two years was cheating on him with the City Councilor’s son, she even embarrassed him in front of a lot of people.
When Roland was already completely devastated and was already at his wits end, a virtual screen suddenly appeared in front of his eyes.
[Requirements: Experience a devastating heartbreak(Completed)]
[System bound!]
[Congratulations for unlocking the Face-Slapping System!]
Since then, Roland’s life has taken a complete turn.
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It’s face slapping novel. Seemingly designed to be painfully generic, it does encompasses all the worst parts of the genre. The MC is an insecure brat going on a powertrip, he has a system which gives him everything, and everyone is an autistic narcissist because that’s the only people our MC can “face slap”. If you enjoy the genre then it might tide you over, but it does nothing particularly well and the glacial pace only makes it more difficult to get through (30 shopping chapters in a row).
A face slapping novel... i know many of you would have already read this type of novel and so did I but still I am enjoying this and you all should also give it a try. story is well written so go for it.
good premisse, had potential, it's well written. however, out of nowhere it got confirmed that it is a cultivation novel, people saying "mortals" and don't even get started with the stupid logic of tiered cities, I mean has a lambo and a gigantic villa,but it sucks because it's from a low grade city? so in the big cities are all the houses made of gold? do they fly? what are hey made of? and the hidden cultivation families. .. . meh I thought it was going to be a urban fantasy with mild superpowers like hero academia, just more hidden, but it's not at all.
The whole plot was just full of unnatural and unrealistic events that completely ruined the immersion for me. The author just kept on forcing situations and writing bad characters with no motive other than to be cannon fodder for MC to face slap. It's essentially just a very surface level wish fulfillment novel which some people may enjoy so try it if that's your thing but I'd say otherwise you might be better off looking for something else.
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my first time reading a faceslapping type novel. throughly enjoyed it. pity that only a few chapters. hope the author will mass release them.
𝐖𝐫𝐢𝐭𝐢𝐧𝐠 𝐐𝐮𝐚𝐥𝐢𝐭𝐲: 5/5. Super good, there are mistakes here and there, but those are minimal, almost to the point you can count them in one hand. 𝐔𝐩𝐝𝐚𝐭𝐢𝐧𝐠 𝐒𝐭𝐚𝐛𝐢𝐥𝐢𝐭𝐲: 5/5. no need to say anything about this, the author said it in the synopsis. 𝐒𝐭𝐨𝐫𝐲 𝐃𝐞𝐯𝐞𝐥𝐨𝐩𝐦𝐞𝐧𝐭: 5/5. So far so good, you can see the character development as you get farther into the story. 𝐂𝐡𝐚𝐫𝐚𝐜𝐭𝐞𝐫 𝐃𝐞𝐬𝐢𝐠𝐧: 5/5. At the start, the character was weak willed, and physically weak. However, as the story progressed, the mc changed and became better than his past self (wont say much cuz I don’t wanna spoil it). people complained that the mc was too weak and naïve and other stuff, even I complained (on my other account, AncestralDragonGod, forgot the password so I can’t login (╥_╥)), however, I still chose to continue reading the novel as I wanted to see its end, and I can say I am not disappointed by how the story has progressed up until now. 𝐖𝐨𝐫𝐥𝐝 𝐛𝐚𝐜𝐤𝐠𝐫𝐨𝐮𝐧𝐝: 5/5. Perfect. Just, perfect.
The overall story theme is childish and full of vanity for me who is interested in developmental issues.. But, the writing is good and the author is committed to the story.
First time reading a novel like this. And I have to say i have been enjoying it so far, I wish it would have been better if MC is little bit more smarter as I feel like he isn't using his system to it's full potential. Overall quality is good. looking forward to what's coming next.
Hey author, will you be back with more frequent updates? A very fun and dynamic novel. [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
the story in beginnin its pretty good but latter became a bit borring , it would be good if it was a non-harem and just develop the relationship with Stacey
It’s super far between chapters and the number or privileged chapters is stupid, not worth waiting for or reading only 1 chapter a week or 2. Should not have any privileges not worth it at all
Please, authors, post updates more often. It's all wonderful. The characters are very real and you can relate to them. And also the plot and system is very inventive.
The story is all good and fun to read also please do stable update author I will always use my power stone for you :))) Also, keep your writing style or upgrade it further. Thanks for the wonderful story, author. Keep safe always!
good writing, interesting start, characters lacking a bit of depth as of now.
unique in its own way , love how the world background is slowly been introduced in subtitleb form showing that there's more to the story
Honest review after 90+ chapters! A lot of people have been thrown off in the first chapter because of the MC's attitude, and especially since he got a green hat, like what the synopsis stated. However, I assure that this only happens in the first chapter. After he got the system, his worldview would slowly change, and his way of handling things would change for the better as well. As long as you can get past the first chapter, I assure you that his attitude shown in the first chapter won't show up again. Now, as English is not my main language, it is subpar compared to others. A lot of readers have also been correcting my mistakes, which I appreciate quite a lot. For updates. I usually upload 1 chapter a day but with bonus chapters obtained from weekly goals, and bonus chapters from sponsors, I would sometimes upload more than 3 chapters in a single day. Story development. As this is a kind of slice of life and wish fulfillment story, the story does not progress very quickly where more than a week will pass after a single chapter. Character design is okay. Although it might not be the best, but I assure you that I sure did my best to make them more alive. World background is also being slowly introduced to avoid info dumps as much as possible. That's all. I hope you give this novel a try! Thank you!