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I feel sorry for you because you can't write a novel. Instead of trying to make one, you stole other people hard work and post it to another platform
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Story is stolen from another author on wattpad without any consent real authors name if you want to read the real thing is Eraser-Da-Boi on wattpad
so only problem I have is the fact that the author will sometimes just has a huge space in the middle of a sentence
I like this Story already hope it gets like this in the next chapter ........................ ................ ........................ ................. ............... ........................ .................... ...........
This fanfiction is very good issei didn't get a harem member in the 1 chapter like most of the DxD fanfiction and The system is good issei don't get op after 1 quest it's gets slowly so keep going
Espero continúes con el gran trabajo!👍😁 🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟
please do not let it drop I haven't actually enjoyed a good novel in a while.
It's interesting, it has huge potential, but the only problem with this fanfic is the grammar which leaves a lot to be desired, I see people giving it 4 stars, 5 stars, but never one criticizing anything below that or talking about the structure of the text '-'
Story stolen from Wattpad, its true author is Eraser-Boi-Dat. Story stolen from Wattpad, its true author is Eraser-Boi-Dat. Story stolen from Wattpad, its true author is Eraser-Boi-Dat.