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DOULUO DALU : NEW ERA
Auteur: goastmonarch
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Synopsis
the journey of Yan Feng in soul land with a system.
system+ reincarnation+ plot knowledge etc
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The story was originally going good but the moment he went to heaven dou academy it pretty much stopped editing the story from the coaxing xiao wu fan fic even quit changing the name, besides a few small things it's like reading the same book.
I have to remind you all if you see this review, and also please read it all the way to the end. When you read this I expect you to turn off your brain. Reasons: lots of typos, lots of spelling mistakes, lots of grammar mistakes, the story feels or maybe is too rushed, and the characters feel too bland for me. Advice to the author: For typos, spelling, and grammar you can probably use grammarly or quillbot if you want. Oh, you can also use Chat GPT and one of the previous two platforms at the same time. And for those of you who see this review, try to read this novel first and decide for yourself what you think about this novel. Because this is my opinion about this novel when I read it in the latest chapter, chapter 11.