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Divine Doctor who kills to heal (under Rewrite)
Auteur: Stella_wants_candy
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Synopsis
"Xing Mei-Ling, My daughter, never show your gift to anyone."
"Even if you were dying?"
"Even then. You must hide it, never use it. For if they find out…"
"If they find out?"
"You'll die"
Dull lifeless brown eyes that were once bright could only watch as the most precious person to her burned away.
If this was what they got for saving life…
Then she never wants to heal someone again.
If it means losing everything they loved…
This woman will never use this curse again.
Even if it is the only way……………
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- Développement de l’histoire
- Conception des personnages
- Contexte du monde
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Writing: The imagery works fine, most wordings are smooth. There are the usual new writer problems such as punctuation marks trouble (ex. no space after punctuation, not ending a dialogue with any punctuation) and some sentence not making sense (ex. "After all no one was left of the family thus cannot punish them. Even the god had agreed with them when he wiped the family out." Neither sentence works.) but still better-than-average for WN Update Speed: -(Relatively New) Story Development: So far the story has a nice road. Not much to say but the fact it went straight into the interaction between Main Characters is good for a WN story. Char Design: The main character has a backstory explained straight of the bat. BIG props for that. So many MC has either no backstory(a waste) or were kept a mystery for a long while(To hell with those edgy characters). And I love the personality and interaction between main characters as well. World: -(Relatively new)