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Disciples of the Forbidden Lord
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Synopsis
Fate.
A rather vague concept for mortals and weak beings.
Even the strong might not be able to escape the clutches of fate.
Will, a supreme being of the Universe thought that his life was pretty much the same as other experts in the Universe.
He thought that he was just destined to chill and play around as he suffered nearly all his life to rise to the top but Fate was a very strange concept.
Will who thought that he is above the laws of fate and density found himself get dragged by it again in the Chaos that unfolded due to gaining knowledge that wasn’t supposed to be known by him early in time.
And before he knew it, the disciples he chose to teach after waking up from his slumber of millions of years, ended having him dragged by fate to play into its hands
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People thought that the end have started.
Many different races thought that by the beginning of the chaos, many would end up losing a lot of their loved ones.
At the same time, times of Chaos are also known as times of great Opportunities.
Dangers and opportunities.
When the incoming Chaos came, many people had this thought.
But, they didn’t know that this was simply a prelude to just a bigger chaos.
They live in a Universe that they thought that it is just like the many out there.
A Universe, that the people outside have thought that it had been lost in the long river of History.
Follow my journey as the destined among the inhabitants of the once-forgotten Universe rises again to power due to the sudden invasion from the Outside Realm.
Watch the rise of Noah and Max.
Two beings who managed to drag a Supreme Being like Will into the unfolding Chaos.
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I can’t promise that the first few chapters are enjoyable since I am a newbie author, but I am pretty sure that I am always evolving as I am trying to make my plot and storyline more perfect and more interesting.
This Novel isn’t a slow-paced one but it isn’t fast-paced, the story is moving in moderation as many things are bound to unfold at the same time in different places.
I don’t know if I am really delivering a story as I imagined in my head but I am doing my best as I am constantly improving and I hope that your reviews and comments can help me do a better job.
I am always open to suggestions from readers. If you have any ideas that might go well with my story, you can just contact me on Discord or leave me a comment.
I hope you have a good read.
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Chapters have word count between 1150 to 1600 Words
Chapter 89--> Chapter ---
Word count between 1500---1800
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I thoroughly enjoyed reading this unique and intriguing story with its interesting plotline. Although the story is told from a mixed point of view, the author skillfully guides the reader through the transitions and clearly identifies who is speaking. The characters were relatable, and I found myself invested in their journeys. I also appreciate that the story was easy to read and had very few mistakes, which made for a seamless reading experience. Overall, I highly recommend this engaging and relatable story to anyone looking for an enjoyable read. 🫡
After 55 chapter I can say the novel is above average. The story doesnt seen too serious, based on the writing style, casual read. The only true downside is that the story is written almost entirely in present tense, even when the narrator is talking which isn't the norm and kinda a turn off from someone that knows english as a first language. Overall still pretty good.
Since I have released 100 chapters already, I decided to drop a few words for my past and future readers. I am not very good with words when talking to people. So, I will just be blunt with my words. My novel is not the best, as it has mistakes, but I am sure that along the way I fixed many of them and managed to improve my writing quality to give a better experience to my readers. My first few chapters may not be the best out there, but I can do nothing about it as I just have to start somewhere. I can't just start by throwing you into a vortex of events when I haven't even started introducing anyone or anything. So, that is what I did in my first chapters. Now that I have reached Volume 3, my story's framework is almost done as the real events of my story are going to start occurring. All I can say, to not spoil my story, is that it will be a Unique ride with many mysteries and discoveries that will certainly interest you if you are a lover of Unique energies, bloodlines, evolutions, Unique species, and much more. Well, that's all for now. I hope you just give it a try and tell me your opinions as I am open to discussions and suggestions from my readers. Maybe some of your suggestions could help me in making my story better. I hope my Novel gives my readers a good experience while reading it. So, Enjoy!