/ Book&Literature / Devourer_Everything can be eaten. Even if you say otherwise.
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No description ... I have no idea for it. So read the prologue
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It’s a great story so far it’s interesting seeing issei as the villain for a change and izanami being the good guy/girl I’m looking forward to your future chapters
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Sorry it was good until i didnt understand like most the stuff they are saying. It feels like it was translated by google Translate. Theirs are paragraph that you wont really understand in the prolog and im guessing your trying to make him out of breath but make it so you understand whats hit trying to say. Ill be changing this Review later tho if it starts to get better. The world background, Character design and Story development are low because you cant understand what they are saying, Its hard to review a FF if you cant understand it
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You must really hate everyone in rias peerage especially rias considering koneko never liked perverts but somehow loves issei jobs would still be friends with the mc cause that's just hiss character and rias would never hate the mc for hitting issei when he was acting perverted to them considering koneko did it countless times
I like is so far i sometimes get a little confused with the grammar but other than that it has good potential and i cant wait to see how you write this further in.