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"I don’t know who you are but… wait, what are you eating? Why are you not sharing it, ah? Do you treat this big sister as a stranger?"
One of the most powerful and devilish beings in existence wakes up in a body of a little mortal girl in a humble place that's a far cry from where she came from. After thousands of years of waiting for reincarnation... seems like even the underworld had kicked her out for all the troubles she caused. But why didn't they put her soul into an immortal's body?!
Well, beggars can't be choosers. She would just have to cultivate back to the peak.
Watch as she tries to keep herself from destroying the world... try being the keyword.
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Her highness the loliness yin has descended😍😍😍 All hail the loli sect!💂 All hail the OPness!💪 All hail the cuteness!💘 All hail the loli sect💞💞💞
This webnovel is an original creation by the author Natsuriayuko and is about the story of a sweet young girl called Yin, oh sorry, it is about the story of an ancient and deadly being in the body of a young girl. Writing Quality: 5/5 The author has a good grasp of the English language, including grammar and spelling, I have yet to notice a writing mistake and I can assume the chapters are checked frequently before release. Stability of Updates: 5/5 As of 14/07/2018, the Author frequently updates the novel, often uploading chapters daily and sometimes twice a day. The morning on the day this review was written, (14/07/2018), 3 chapters were uploaded, which is nice considering there was no chapter the day before. Moreover, the Author will take into account suggestions and ideas, improving his work and making amendments to the content in his story. One such example was when later on, there is a character labelled as 'S-Ranked', I brought this up in the discussion section and I wondered as to why a term often found in both games and Japanese novels was suddenly brought up in a story with primarily Chinese Wuxia and Xianxia cultivation terms, Natsuriayuko saw this and altered the term to 'First-Ranked Occupation', this was not a big deal, but it goes to show that on this site you can engage with the Author and provide suggestions, it goes to show that he is willing to listen. Story Development: 4/5 As of now, the direction the story is going in is unclear, all we know is this Yin has possessed the body of someone possibly very important or of status, which may bring complication later on. Yin, is making her way in becoming stronger and regaining her Primordial Yin body, which is funny considering all of the Yin Qi in the world was from her death as an ancient being. Character Design: 4/5 So far, as the novel has just started, the characters have not had much time to develop. The original character design is good and there are some likeable characters. Especially Yin, who is the main focus of this story. She is funny, sly and tends to make trouble for those around her. However it is shown that she has started to care for those around her, which is a nice development. However, she is brutal to those not in her immediate 'family'. What stops this novel from receiving 5 stars in this department is the fact that I personally disliked the way the 'First Ranked Assassin' was handled, we get little dialogue from her and she is quickly killed off. I felt that it would have been nice for a chapter to be about the Assassin fighting, this would also help solidify the World Background as we can get a glimpse into how they fight and how the cultivation works. This was a good opportunity to showcase the fighting style/action style that the novel will use and to show the power of the cultivation stage that both the Assassin and most of the people in Yin's surrounding is at. World Background: 3/5 There is not much to say about the development of the background of the world that Yin is currently staying at, however, the story and background behind who Yin was in the past and what she had achieved is very well thought out. As mentioned previously in the review, the Yin Qi (or 99% of it) within the world that is a staple within cultivation novels actually belongs to her in this novel, this shows how powerful she was in the past. She consumes a lot of Yin Qi early on in the story and she explains that his amount is like a drop in the ocean to what she once was, yet again hinting at how powerful she was. I have yet to see a story that has such a bizarre and interesting plot point as this one. Other than this, the story develops the sects well and the quality is very good. I feel that if I continue reading this novel, which I definitely will, there will come a time when I have to edit my review and update the rating. This is because there has not been much time to develop the world and it is unfair to judge a novel based of the first 50 chapters. Only when it reaches a 100, do I dare say that it is a good amount of chapters to make my final decision on the world building and character design. Conclusion: 4.2/5 In conclusion, I feel that the main driving force being this novel so far is not the action or story but in fact the main character and her hilarious antics. There have been a few times so far where I have cackled like a hyena while reading this novel and I cannot get enough of Yin and her complete disregard for everything serious happening around her, completely stuck on the fixation of playing and manipulating people for both her and her friends/family's own benefit, as well as just for her own amusement.
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Wonderful writing quality, extremely adorable and endearing characters, clear ships and the most humorous and shameless main character, what more can I ask for? Give this a try, you definitely won't regret it!
Do you like the idea of cultivation but are bored by the same protagonist that appears in every single one. Well here’s a novel for you that twists literally every trope a cultivation novel has on its head. For starters, our MC is *gasp* female! She also doesn’t care about honor?! Doesn’t kill every person that slighted her without knowing who she is?! Still has a sense of humor???!!!!!! If I didn’t any better this would be disqualified from being a cultivation novel based on those characteristics alone ;)
One of the better originals out there. The characters and storytelling are the best parts of this novel. Truly engaging. I hate to admit it but I envy the author's talent. I do think the author shouldn't be cruel hearted to the readers. A series like this one deserve a release rate of least 20 chapters per week 😝 *evil laughter*
Just reading a couple of chapters got me hooked... you will love the protagonist, little yin is a she-devil but adorable in a quirky kind of way. And the translations is so good, can’t wait for the next chapter.
It's been a wonderful story so far, the characters are very likable and funny (especially the MC and Ye Mo) and I'm just having a great time reading this novel. I recommend to anyone who loves stories about female MC, cultivation, shameless characters (especially the MC), comedy and of couser lolis (just kidding kkkkkkk)
I'm not a person that's good at reviewing things but to me this novel is a very good one, I read all chapters at one go and am waiting for more Keep up with the good work !
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Sure, I'll join the love sect with little Yin as the sect master. Just please don't make me play with her! Well, here's to hoping that Yin can continue to be an adorable loli for a long time. Keep up the good work.
How come I've missed such a nice and a funny story.. i think its quiet funny i love this story specially the 5th chapter it makes me laugh even if i dont want to. can you post more chapters so that we can enjoy some more please....😉
I picked this one up with a bunch of other loli novels and can say for sure that this ones belongs to the better ones. The way on how she actually acts like a child even though its not for her age but because of her personality takes the cake for me.
The story is not really for me but I would still give it a try. Basically Yin is the MC, the female lead. She is a spirt who had reincarnated from the underworld into a dead girls body who just happened to be a baby. So this book is a loli one at the same time... I only read to C20 but once she got "kidnapped" the story is not progressing really so I feel like the book is more of like a cute isekai while still having some plot.
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Writing Quality? 5☆ Grammar is nice, I need nothing more. Stability of Updates? 5☆ No idea, so five stars. Story Development? 5☆ There is an ancient devil which is reborn as a loli and anything else is a spoiler... Character Design? 5☆ Ancient. Devil. Loli. World Background? 5☆ Did I mention an ancient devil and a loli? 5☆
I like the characters and writing style of this story. There's a focus on the characters and their interactions with each other, with the right amount of action mixed in. The main character Yin is especially well written and I hope to see many more chapters of this novel.
THE POTATO ALONE DESERVES FIVE STARS! WITH A POTATO AS AN AUTHOR, HOW COULD THE STORY, BE BAD?! THE SECT OF GREEN POTATO HAS ALREADY BE ESTABLISHED WITHIN THE HIGHER UPS OF AUTHORS IN THE DISCORD SERVER, AND HERE I AM, PRAISING THE SOVEREIGNTY OF THE GREAT GREEN POTATO, WITH THE GREEN POTATO AS THE BASTION, WHO DARES TO CAUSE STRIFE?!
i think this was the last one, not sure tho hehe .....................................................................................................................................
TAKE EVERYTHING I HAVE YOU CANT STOP ME goodbye my 5 little stars and stones ...........................................................................................................................
Hi, I'm the author (or as others may say, the narrator) of Little Yin's story. Watch as she turns the world upside down with her crazy antics and weird humor, while trying to understand what it's like to be human. Chapters are short, on average about 600-800 words, but updates are twice a day so I guess it makes up for it. I have an attitude when I'm starving, and it can be seen in the Author's Note. Hangry is real. Leave me Comments and drop some Power Stones for bonus chapters! Google me. You may find something interesting.