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Devil’s Dominion is a story based in the year 3000, with humans dwindling in faith for the gods and even the devils, after realizing they're the sons of the devil, Kinea and Kean find themselves in the realm of the undead to escape from the clutches of their true father and to find their old one.
With the world demons slowly infiltrating the real world it's up to them to stop them while training and finding clues of their father along with uncovering mysteries through the world. A war is brewing the final war in history to decide who will survive, who will win good or evil, right or wrong, gods or devils.
Will the twins even find their father before it’s too late
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I really enjoy reading about mythologies and from the description this was one that handled that so i came in with high hopes and in 5 chapters it has done beautifully in doing that, the garden of babylon, dantes inferno and even the hinting of a wendigo in the latest chapter.
Your novel has amazing potential. It's already good as it is but fixing the paragraph spacing will make it even better. You're doing a good job. Keep it up 👍
The story has alot of potential.... i am a bit iffy on the two MCs. because they seem like crybabies, but honestly they are highschool students so they need a grow proces. i would just change the shape of your text without using tabs it makes it seem alot messier then it is. keep going it could be something worthwhile
Great story so far and has a lot of potential to be great. I advice the author to use grammarly or find an editor to help him grammatically
This story has potential. I suggest that the author write in past tense as, generally, that's more attractive to readers. Grammar isn't *too* bad, flow is quite nice, good storyline so far. Nice and enjoyable read if edited thoroughly. Good luck author
This story brims with immense potential and showcases a unique narrative. While the overall content is engaging, a touch of grammar refinement could elevate it to one of the top reads in its genre. I believe with some dedicated editing and consistent effort. This could become a favorite among readers.
I really like the author's writing style. The author has a certain way with words that keeps you wanting to read more. The book is easy to read and has little to no grammatical mistakes. Would definitely recommend this.
There aren’t many chapters and it takes quite a while to update. Characters have very much potential. Intense and fast paced beginning. There are some sentences that needs improvement. Like some sentences can be shortened to make it sound better. I saw the mistake you put capitalization after dialogue. Example: “He killed the animal,” He said. It sound be lowercase in “he said” because it is a continuation of the sentence, not a new sentence.
The story is good, the title is a little weird but okay. The overall writing quality is not bad but it's not good either. The book looks like it has potential.
I only read the first few chapters but it made me want to read the rest! However, I kept having the feeling that author is not used to the difference between telling and showing so that's one part I wish future chapters would address. Great work, cheers! [img=recommend]
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Had to give it a five. Although the writing comes off as anime styled, I definitely am drawn in. From the first chapter we are in a school setting with a pair of twins. And these twins end up experiencing creepy people holding candles and opening a book, chanting. The stuff you see in horror movies. Not going to spoil it all, but they are given a choice and I can say first three chapters are action packed. I was at the edge of my seat. I plan to keep reading more. Author did amazing!
What a nice story but please, author, use a spellchecker, like grammarly, or even just google docks. Thank you, thank you thankyuthanktuthankut
As many people said in reviews. I am also saying same. please fix presentation and work a little on grammar. Btw, story is interesting, start was great.
An exciting story with twins as MCs, making it double the fun. If you like myths you're going to love this. The author could improve the grammar to make it easier to read, but I still hope to read more chapters in the future.
Reminds me of the old days, where I was ambitious... Other than the writing quality being decent the story was not lacking
I like the idea behind it. The characters are realistic. And the world building is building up It needs to fix its sentences.
love the story surprisingly it was better than I anticipated, keep up the good work and make sure to update more chapters we're waiting
even if it 3 chaps, I'll still give 5 stars, but please fix the sentences cause it looks like they been space all the way