Desolate Mage: A Legend Reborn!

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Ierrech

I wasn't going to double review, but I thought I'd share this story I doodled out in the comments for you. It was late at night. Zeref had just closed up when he heard heavy footsteps outside. *Stomp stomp stomp*; then they stopped - right outside the bar doors. "Hello...?" He called out; but it was quiet; with just the pitter patter of rain outside. (Wait, rain...?) His eyes widened in horror. It wasn't raining. It was... Oh it's done. 140 characters reached.

LV 4

Kazi223

Well done! Good grammar, nice background story to it all, and a unique writing style that is nice. Well done indeed! - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - -- - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - -- - - - - - - - - - -- - - - - -- - - - - - - - - - - - -- - - - --

LV 14

whe

Wow this is bad. WN really is scraping the bottom of the barrel for contracted works, aren't they now. It's like a weird semi-romance ntr fantasy ??? hybrid with tons of tense, phrasing, and other errors. no wonder the other people are pissed that wn is deleting reviews on this... it's like alemillach and wiz's novels all over again. WN botspams good reviews and deletes any bad ones. smh.

LV 15

JunM

POV is okay. I love POV, but when POV is everything. It’s kind of hard to follow. Plus, it’s not necessary. Plot was interesting. Please keep the good work!

LV 12

syazzie

I love the story so far. It's well written and the plot is moving in a good pace. I love the character and I'm looking forward to how the plot develops from now on. I agree with the other reviewer, the girl can be a little annoying... but overall, a good read!

LV 12

Demon_Daoist_Asura

As for this story, I think its very enjoyable. I also have found it very sad so far, our poor tragic MC. No luck with girls, though I secretly hope it turns BL. Hahahaha. Though thats not everyones cup of tea. It has the reincarnation, and keeping past life memories, sadly it doesnt seem to be a time rewindal ones, it doesnt seem like the dead can ever truly come back to life. The writing is really good, and even if it actually had bad writing I truly couldn't tell it apart after reading this story, its just too enjoyable. Though on the subject of writing quality sometimes I feel the plotline jump a bit, though if you reread the chapter things will make sense, and even reading a bit slower. The stability of updates so far is consistent, I give top marks fo this since I love gettin bonus chapters and we've been getting them. Though kind of oiffed I thought author was going to give us 2 chapters today the 5th of November 2018, but well it was an authors note, some people gsve bad reviews, so shame to those trash talkers. Though maybe they are just trashing the book because its so enjoyable, a black hat reviewer, they talk trash only because they really love the book, they give low rating so the autho certainly reads there review and maybe reply, I read a book like that once. Nonetheless for our dear author, this reader loves your book. The story development is mostly smooth, I mentioned earlierinthe story development thst i felt the chspters skip parts, it could be the writing or how the book develops, but well sometimes things jump suddenly, in one of the recent chapters, one of the characters, from the description got castrated, but due to how it was written I thought a certsin character was trying to castrate our MC. *reader went pale* it was only then that I re read the chapter before i understood it was talkin about Sharon, and not MC. Also the first chapter and the seemed to be in the future, whereas the following chapters seemed in the past, I'm somewhat cinfused about our timeline, but I think I've got the gist of it, though it would be helpful if author could clarify the timeline perhaps. Of main events. And the story development isnt an info dump, though sometimes I wish there was more informstion, though I reckon this information will be provided later on to build the story and world, and if its so early it would be a mere spoiler, just blame me for wanting to read it all at once. The character design is very good, though I can't help but dislike some characters and I am a bit annoyed at some character interaction, but the characters are developing as the story goes on. Hence I'm giving full marks for the character designs, as for if the characters are worthy of it, it will depend on how our characters develop. The world background i give 4 stars, so to say there sre mutliple worlds, its more like a universe background, but its very confusing at some parts, I think it could be explained better, but resders hsve an understsnding of the world background. I'm looking forward to how that develops, I think it would only get better as th story goes on, but 4 stsrs due to my frustration. For newcomers who are unsure whether to read this book or not, I think its totally worth your time, give 10 chapters a try, if your not hooked then let the fish go, i found the chapters a bit confusing at first, bu everything eventually flows, its like a puzzle. The book has some epic OPness, tragic love, death of loved ones, betrayal, Orphan MC so potential for an epic OP backstory, reincarnation, darkness of the world, a bit naivity, and penguin cuteness, Good Looking op MC, Magic, a bit rpg like with professions, legendary weapons, technology advancment, mystery, very evil characters and a half good half evil mc.

LV 4

daoist_om

I know It's still early but the novel has a professional feel to it, mc character is well developed; has good descriptions and good fighting scenes if I may add. if it continues like this then it will be popular. thanks!

LV 3

twilymeeks

“I turned myself into a bad original Webnovel, Morty!” “I’M TRASH WEBNOVEL RICK!!!” Okay, look. I’m just gonna be straight forward and say that compared to the other Original Webnovels on this site, this is probably one you shouldn’t waste your time on. Don’t waste your Spirit Stones on this, it’s very incoherent and just overall an absolute mess of a novel. If this author writes another work, I hope it’ll be MUCH better than what this is.

LV 14

Afternoone

Not the first, but I am here to support 0.0 I finished the first few chapters... ————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————

LV 2

LetsBeReal

I am leaving an honest review even tho the way the author dealt with the 'spam' from the one user left a really bad taste in my mouth. Delete the alt reviews, but not even leave the first review they left? It was their honest opinion, just deleted because it was top voted ...and the author has left THREE 5*star reviews on their own novel....undeleted...HAHA Anyway: MC is so passive. And emo, it actually kills. He legit wallows in self pity and doesn't do crap even tho he's a legendary mage. Oh, he is also cheated on TWICE. I can't sympathise with any of the characters. Too many POV changes that don't add to the story. Story development...*sigh* 30+ chapters in and where is the 'demon' he is supposed to contract? It's in the title and summary! Feels like even author doesn't know where the story is going. Also, so many semicolons. Everywhere. I'm pretty sure I saw 3 semicolons in ONE sentence early on and it's bad. Pls re-edit. Stability of updates is good. Would have been a good story, but too many things make you feel annoyed until at the end you just flip the table.

LV 3

BoredPanda

What's with this awesome Novel?! Great Writing Quality with little to no errors. Though the Stability Updates is a little low, I think it's still acceptable(I think) Since this is a Novel for a Writing Contest, the concept must be Reunion of Couples(I THINK, but I might be wrong) Though it does not really focus too much on Romance, it still has some. DAMN! The past of the MC just hurts me, it's shattering my HEART! ALL HAIL TO NTR-sama! Character Design is good, a man whose powerful but can't have the woman of her life, seems great. World Background, well no complaints there.

LV 5

Eddicted

One of the worst stories ever.author seems to be a fan of tragic and senseless love stories of fools and idiots.he also has a very messed up story writing style.he is a very disgusting one to not clearly mention that this is more of a totally f*cked up retarded love story than a proper mage story in the synopsis.dont read it if you are not a fan of depraved and senseless love stories

LV 13

matsusi

well if i gotta say one thing about this book it's that it's worth a read.The story so far has been great .I'm really looking forward to how this is gonna develop .The is damn good with how he's developed each character and how he brings their emotions across .He writes the book in terms of multiple perspectives so far it's been a good read.Don't be bothered by the bad reviews too much,just read and you'll weather you like it .But i think it's a great book so far

LV 10

Mirezis

Really enjoying to read, very well written story. Keep up the good work. Added to library and hoping for MORE chapters. 5★ .........................

LV 2

Gingerygarf

Good webnovel that keeps you wanting to read on and on. Storywise it starts off slow but picks up and really draws you in. Good thing it updates really fast! I didn't like the character at first but he slowly grew on me, and the world and system is quite interesting. Also, you will usually find plenty of bad grammar and typos in webnovels but this has barely any. Highly recommend reading this.

LV 14

reseter18

Mc is a big pussy. Enough said. Dont be fooled by the summary. No matter how powerful or smart the mc is hes still a pussy. Start from chap 31 read the other reviews and you miss much. Reminds me of those cockholded husband. Dont waste your ss on this.

LV 5

JaoWik

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LV 3

GodTian

I really tried to give it a try, but it's so deprecating that I almost got traumatized thinking about thinking about having a girlfriend. . lol ... Good luck with your romance ....