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DC :Vampire Queen
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Synopsis
Our MC wakes up in DC Universe, confused and annoyed
And worried about his weird family and what he should Do in his new like in a world of heroes and villains because he can't think he will fit either of those so what will he Do now
Check out how a terrifying new girl on the block of DC can Do
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You english is very good, this could have been a very good ff. Sadly this ff reads like a diary with no dialogues whatsoever. I couldn't continue and had to stop after only reading a couple of chapters.
I read through chapter eight. I like it overall. Vampirism in DC/Gotham sounds cool. The writing didn't have many errors. The writing style is rough because it's both robotic and ambiguous. There are some missing pieces of the story/plotholes. A bit of writing repetition with limited vocabulary is involved. I'd say give it six chapters to drop or not. Overall, it's a 3.6 for me.
Hello a random guy here I am just writing fanfics for fun and to see if I can write I am Bored and want to learn how to write and maybe in future write my own original novel but until then if you like enjoy this Doggy here