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A man found himself in a parallel earth without a family to protect him was adopted by a criminal. He was force into a life of crime to survive in the world's most dangerous universe.
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Crdt: Tangrin (Gabriel Henrique)
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Écrire un avisStory is good, few mistakes here and there with the occasional annoying pov switches. My problem is with the character, I don’t know if that’s the author’s intention but the mc is a literal Percy Jackson demigod(in my eyes). Problem is he’s not like the others whose power levels change with respect to the enemy, his power levels remain the same. Dude is more like a mortal with the gift for underworld magic and artifacts than a demigod honestly Now for the story development: I’ve read 101 chapters and I honestly don’t see where this story is going. Things(at least to me) are just haywire. I don’t see the benefits of the mcs training and he has the same difficulty with every for he faces. Besides as a transmigrator he makes series of mistakes which is honestly just getting old and redundant The story is really good honestly but the little little things like this make it frustrating (it’s like I’m reading a dc comic all over again and let me tell you it’s interesting for kids with all the minor plot holes but not for me) Nice story author
The chapters are good the story is not quick so i would say that is a pretty good fanfic if you enjoy a slow read .uudehidicuzdhczdiuhcdzuidcziucbdiubcijdcneijcnuefncijefnfncojncfjoncou
how could he be the son of hades god of the underworld ruler of the dead and be a hero disappointing
All round it's a boring story with an uninteresting main character everything happens "just because" and the fact that a demigod is struggling against someone like Deathstroke is laughable, grammatical mistakes littered all over this, barely any character development don't waste your time on this, there's no tension, build ups or pay offs the MC is like watching paint just waiting to be dried, I just hope no one is stupid enough to purchase chapters on the Patreon.
Just a warning the mc is not a prince of the crime underworld but of the myth underworld. I'm really disappointed by that.
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I just can't read it anymore. The mc started out as quite a nice one. But then by the vampire attack, a random magician almost killed mc. I usually read SI fanfics coz their mcs act differently from the native characters. Most fanfic mcs have some powers to turn things around. This mc is disappointing. His powers are so weak, I thought I should read the dc comics itself rather than this. I want a powerful SI. So be careful if anyone else is like me.
Spoiler de révélationthe story is well written, the world is reasonably fleshed out.... there are some liberties with characters but not so much theyre essentially ocs.... however the protagonist is as bland as untoasted bread.... being a demigod son of hadessomehow isnt enough to redeem him.... he has no agency no wants or goals or needs he is the definition of going with the flow. he also has no reactions to anything that happens to him.... no emotional response to anything... also hes a literal demigod prince of death with a strict no killing rule.. but theres no meaning behind it its not moral duty its not rebellion against an absent father hes just bending to the local rule of killing bad without logic even if the criminal is a genocidal maniac..... i read upto chapter 105...... but it doesnt get more tolerable.....
Spoiler de révélationThe main character and the portrayals of the DC characters are fantastic. While I was hoping for a more “Anti-Hero” approach because he grew up in Gotham and is the son of Hades, I ultimately think his character development has been fantastic. From what I have seen the update schedule for the story leaves a bit to be desired, but the story itself is worth the wait.
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i only read the first ch but how can he be the Prince of the underworld if he's a hero and not an anti-hero?