DC: Allen The Alien

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Guaca

Okay now hear my out he left earth and stuff so why not have Allen join Darkseid that would be something interesting and new Mc gains Darkseid trust becoming almost a son to him so like when Darkseid inevitably invades earth with the help of Allen they would conquer earth and kill every super hero and villain who is against Darkseid I know it’s a little dark but this is a new and interesting idea for the story. ( Darkseid is one of my favorite characters ).

LV 10

Daoist_Dan

Don't put this in your library and let it sit. Try it out and get hooked like I think you will be so the writer can have the motivation to continue! It's a fantastic concept and it looks like it's going to be written very well!

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MilkMan32

Honestly, it's worth the read. It being a Young Justice story alone makes it amazing to see. But the writing it good and to see an Allen the alien story underrated character in my opinion so far the wishes and character development are going good I guarantee you'll enjoy it.

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Greed_Anthem

love the Allen the alien transmigration it's very original plz keep on writing [img=recommend]

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Flexco8

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