/ Anime & Comics / Danmachi: The Demigod
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One day a 14 year old boy died of a rare condition that the doctors had no cure for. But he woke up to find himself inside of Danmachi which was one of his favorite anime but what he was surprised about was that he didn’t meet any god or ROB to give him wishes.
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mate. a word of advice would be to take a unique approach, especially in the world of danmachi. I can see you did that with the whole demigod story but you paired with the mc losing his family. which honestly ruined the story and makes the story boring or cliche and may make the mc too bland. a common mistake in many web novel fanfics. honestly, if you fix those mistakes is an interesting fanfic to read. but I'm afraid this is as far as I can go. hope you have success and good luck 👍
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