DanMachi: Reborn as Bell Cranel

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LiveMan

writing quality: slightly below average. The story has a few grammatical errors but it is otherwise fine. story development: a bit weird. the main character is reincarnated as bell cranel. the odd part is that it is mentioned that he flirts with girls and because of this, quite a few have fallen in love with him. at the time, we find out that he is only about 1 years old. I find this extremely odd. character design: again I have to give it a 1 star here because of the flirting baby. update stability: I gave it 4 stars because the story is frequently updated. world background: 4 stars because this is fanfiction and the majority of the world background is done by the original creators.

LV 5

mutekishifu

so far i loved it, i never read in danmachi that zeus helps at the beginning, i liked it ....................................................................................................................

LV 5

Evil_Jesus

Quite a good Danmachi fanfic, actually. A very fun read, so much so that among the the Danmachi ffs I'm following right now this is the one whose chapters I look forward to the most. I felt it was very different compared to the other ones I've read. They usually kinda follow a pattern at the start. This one went down a different route with him getting Falna at like 2 years old and training outside Orario with Zeus. Some complained about the MC "flirting with girls" as a 1 year old boy... I don't understand the overreaction. There weren't any scenes of the MC interacting with girls until he met Hestia when he was already 14 years old around chapter 10, so I only saw the thing about flirting as a meme, and since Zeus (a womanizer) was the one raising him... When I thought of him flirting with little girls I could only imagine something very light like children talking normally, not something imoral. There are some English mistakes but they didn't bother me much, though I'd advise the author to get an editor. The MC idea of getting money and the process were a problem too but since the author didn't go into details it didn't bother me. It's worth reading.

LV 4

Novel_Guru

Well, I say its Okay story to read but synopsis and story development do not match .. literally he only use carts, solar panel, bulb, and battery from modern world and he trained old fashioned way... and when he got his lightning magic he didn't even used his past life memory to train his magic. Also i got a feeling of mc being brainwashed so disappointed at how high he could have reached if he didn't completely follow his grandfather.. making weapons with lightning magic where he could use it like killua from HxH.. or use guns for weapons.

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asaade_ragnarokm

warning this fic contains a monster baby and zeus with no intelligence warning this fic contains a monster baby and zeus with no intelligence warning this fic contains a monster baby and zeus with no intelligence warning this fic contains a monster baby and zeus with no intelligence

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ArthurCE10

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JoshsDragon

please update this is soooo good . . . .

LV 4

Minilini

Overall its not bad, so if you dont have anything to read and can ignore some annoying things that happen in the story then you can give it a try.

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nasnasnas

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Nah_U_Stupid

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Daoistnff2Xl

Por favor sigue la historia 🙏 😥 😭 👇💚 🙏 😥 😭 👇💚🙏 😥 😭 👇💚 🙏 😥 😭 🙏 😥 😭 👇🙏 😥 😭 👇💚 🙏 😥 😭 🙏 😥 😭 👇💚 🙏 😥 😭 👇💚 😥 😭 👇💚 🙏 😥 😭 👇💚 😥 😭 👇💚

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Christ_Apostle

Update please don't drop this..............................................................................................................................................................................

LV 4

kratos_clone

please dont drop !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

LV 3

nicehat

Gooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooood job hope to see more

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gamingsus

I feel like watching the anime instead of reading novel thats how cool it is[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]