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Your regular not everyday cyberpunk addict dies due to a flying truck. However after being isekaied into her favorite game, she was wanting to be the best merc out there. But a little surprise awaits her, she was in the year 2076...
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So the Mc is a female that loves cyberpunk. Both the anime and the game even as buggy as it is. She spends all her life basicly playing cyberpunk and watching anime. If you have question or suggestions for my grammar, leave it in the comments
Giving 5stars becaUse this work feels new but to help you out ima give some tips. First you started off way too quick with only a paragraph explaining her past. cant just rush a story like that. Second you really just jumped into it, thats good in some cases but immediately killing 10-20 people to get an mc and think the mc would be okay with it is bad as you didnt explain anything or give the charachters depth. Lastly this is a personal preFerence but you should always keep the reincarnation as hidden and secret as possible. By telling the mcs of the fanfic you can ruin an entire plot and story in one go. If you really want to make it known build charachter relations and depth before doIng so Good idea and attempt but you need to try and slow it down if you want it to improve
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pretty good if I have to say so, a lot better start then some of the fics I've read. It's a great start so far and I hope the author continues and finishes it out I do recommend giving it a read too