Synopsis
Fang Yuan had a simple ambition of getting into any of the seven large sects and becoming wealthy to provide for his family until he got that pagoda. His goals changed and he now wanted to become an Immortal and conquer the world.
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Cadeaux
-- Cadeau
reçu État de l’alimentation hebdomadaire
-- Classement
Power Stone 
-- Power
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- Contexte du monde
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Love me a good eastern novel. I like where the book is headed, it’s obvious you have a good idea about the future of your story. Nice writing too, good descriptions and dialogue. My only critique is that it’s very slow in the beginning, I wish you had begun with the pagoda opening instead of the awkward two year training/breakfast montage.
it's really good and interesting, more updates