Synopsis
This is a mix of all worlds. A traveler who moves from time to time, from space to space, as long as his mission is achieved. The mission is to reach the top of any world he moves to. Be it in cultivation, wealth, or fame, he has to top these depending on which rules his world.
This is a story of wanting it all.
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I've just started reading the book and ratings will be changed as necessary. The book is just starting so obviously world development and character design are still ongoing. But so far I like the humor and bases for this novel. It's quite interesting that he will move through different worlds yet it won't be a quick transmigration so I'm looking forward to following through.
the character from the story is unique, the whole concept of the book is overwhelming. it gets even interesting as you read on . keep up the good work
I always forget to leave a review on a book that I have read before. Great book from a great author
Very well written. A creative and compelling story. The character is relatable and the story in set a world which, while fictional, has many of the same underpinnings as today's society.
The book is awesome. I just read a few chapters and got the urge to review it, the world setting is unique, the characters are amazing and the grammars are on point. Nice one author!
Hi there, I just read a few chapters of your story! Your story is quite entertaining. However, just want to suggest that you improve your writing style. For instance, instead of doing this [*knock knock knock*], say that "I heard a knocking at my door." Type in detail what is happening instead of doing what I mentioned above. Furthermore, try using Grammarly to check the proper structure of a sentence. You already established a lot of reads so I believe that many readers are interested in your work, you just need to improve it. Thank you for the wonderful read!
The character is well developed and so is the humor. The story provokes emotion and emotions are sometimes more troublesome to convey than ideas. Overall it's a pretty well developed for a first novel, you clearly put a lot of though and effort into this and it resulted in a pretty good read. Well done.