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Bounded With The Devil
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Having lived her life with her mom, Arabelle was a naive and sweet girl, at least that was everyone's opinion of her till her mom was brutally killed by her father right in front of her.
All that was in her mind was REVENGE and she would have it no matter the cost. She would destroy her father's family one by one.
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Her eyes narrowed as she stared at him. "Can you help me? I will do anything to have them at my feet." All she needed at that point was the power to destroy them.
The man smirked at the fire in the woman's eyes showing her determination. "Are you sure you can do anything?"
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I've only read the first few chapters, but I can say that the story is off to a good start; I felt bad for the MC, having her mother killed; there are a few grammatical errors here and there, but nothing major, there is space for improvement; overall, good story; good luck, author!
this whole book is just amazing to good to read anthe chapters are nice. Keep it up .
Honestly the first chapter is a little dull for me and there are some minor grammatical errors too. The description of how her father killed her mother wasn't terrifying enough and I don't know but it feels like it happened too fast. But I gave it another try and read the second chapter, and that's where it went great. The description of how Arabelle escaped is really nice. I'll still give it 4 stars for the writing quality cuz of the errors but it's good!!! Good job (ㆁωㆁ)
Amazing! A story from my most favourite author. It even started well this time. The start for this story is totally amazing. I like the synopsis too. It's simple and short. I am looking forward to more releases.