Chapitre 48: 46: System Update
Shiro stirred awake as the faint morning light seeped through the thin paper windows of his dorm room. His eyes felt heavy, the exhaustion from the previous day lingering in his muscles. He slowly got up and shuffled toward the bathroom, his feet dragging across the floor.
He rubbed his face with a tired sigh as he turned on the cold water. The shock of icy droplets jolted him to alertness, chasing away the last remnants of sleep. The freezing cascade washed over him for fifteen long minutes, and he relished the clarity it brought. As the water stopped, Shiro reached for a towel, drying himself off with slow, deliberate movements.
Standing before the bathroom mirror, he let his eyes wander over his reflection. His gaze inevitably fell upon the scar etched into his stomach—a grotesque reminder of his encounter with Kurozai. His fingers grazed the rough mark, the phantom pain of the hollow's claws momentarily flashing in his mind.
Kurozai wasn't just a hollow; it was a monstrosity designed for destruction, and Shiro bore the proof of that encounter on his very skin. His fist clenched at the memory of that day, his frustration mingling with an unshakable determination to grow stronger.
He shook the thought away and turned back to the present. Something else had been bothering him—a faint, persistent notification from the system the night before. Curious, Shiro decided it was time to investigate.
Shiro swiped his hand in front of him, summoning the familiar glowing screen of his system.
System Update: 100% Complete
The text blinked before his eyes, and then a second screen unfolded, revealing the changes:
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Unlocking Status Progression:
1%: One Tomoe Sharingan
10%: Two Tomoe Sharingan
20%: Three Tomoe Sharingan
30%: Storm Release Awakening
40%: All Seven Chakra Natures Unlocked
50%: Mangekyō Sharingan Awakening
60%: Mokuton (Wood Release) Awakening
60%: Mokuton (Wood Release) Awakening
70%: Eternal Mangekyō Sharingan Awakening
80%: Rinnegan Unlocked
90%: Jinchūriki Of Juubi (Ten Tails)
100%: Rinne-Sharingan Awakening
"This is... much better than before," he muttered to himself, unable to suppress a small grin. The thought of combining his Sharingan prowess with elemental manipulation filled him with anticipation.
Before he could finish contemplating, another screen materialized before his eyes, this one glowing brighter than the last.
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System Update: New Features Added
1. Multiverse Travel System:
Travel freely to any fictional universe of your choosing.
2. Point System + System Shop:
Earn points by altering events, characters, or outcomes in any universe you visit.
Use points to purchase weapons, abilities, or enhancements from the System Shop.
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Shiro blinked in disbelief. His heart raced as he imagined the opportunities this unlocked. A system that could grant him access to infinite worlds—each with its own powers, abilities, and challenges. The point system added another layer of strategy, making every decision meaningful.
He couldn't help but wonder: What universe would I visit first?
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Shiro woke up early in the morning, his body still heavy with sleep. Groggily, he stumbled into the bathroom, his eyes half-closed.
He turned on the cold shower, letting the icy water cascade over him. The chill jolted him awake, clearing the fog in his mind. He stood under the water for fifteen minutes, savoring the refreshing sensation before stepping out. Grabbing a towel, he dried off, his movements slow but deliberate.
As Shiro glanced into the mirror, his hand instinctively moved to the scar on his stomach—the lasting reminder of his encounter with Kurozai. The memory of that battle flashed in his mind, a mix of pain and determination flickering in his eyes.
With a sigh, he refocused. Something else had been nagging him since the evening before. The system. It had been pestering him with notifications, and he had ignored it until now.
"Let's see what you've got," he muttered, bringing up the interface.
The familiar translucent screen appeared before him, glowing faintly:
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System Update: Complete [100%]
New Unlocking Status:
1%: One-Tomoe Sharingan
10%: Two-Tomoe Sharingan
20%: Three-Tomoe Sharingan
30%: Storm Release
40%: All Seven Chakra Natures
50%: Mangekyō Sharingan Awakening
60%: Mokuton (Wood Release) Awakening
70%: Eternal Mangekyō Sharingan
80%: Rinnegan
90%: Jinchūriki of the Ten-Tails
100%: Rinne-Sharingan
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Shiro's eyes widened slightly as he read the updated list. It was far better than the system's previous version. His excitement grew when he reached the line about the Seven Chakra Natures.
"All seven..." he whispered to himself, a small smile creeping onto his face. "That means Lava Release, Dust Release... The possibilities are endless."
As he was imagining the techniques he could create, another notification popped up before his eyes:
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Shiro woke up early in the morning, his body still heavy with sleep. Groggily, he stumbled into the bathroom, his eyes half-closed.
He turned on the cold shower, letting the icy water cascade over him. The chill jolted him awake, clearing the fog in his mind. He stood under the water for fifteen minutes, savoring the refreshing sensation before stepping out. Grabbing a towel, he dried off, his movements slow but deliberate.
As Shiro glanced into the mirror, his hand instinctively moved to the scar on his stomach—the lasting reminder of his encounter with Kurozai. The memory of that battle flashed in his mind, a mix of pain and determination flickering in his eyes.
With a sigh, he refocused. Something else had been nagging him since the evening before. The system. It had been pestering him with notifications, and he had ignored it until now.
"Let's see what you've got," he muttered, bringing up the interface.
The familiar translucent screen appeared before him, glowing faintly:
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System Update: Complete [100%]
New Unlocking Status:
1%: One-Tomoe Sharingan
10%: Two-Tomoe Sharingan
20%: Three-Tomoe Sharingan
30%: Storm Release
40%: All Seven Chakra Natures
50%: Mangekyō Sharingan Awakening
60%: Mokuton (Wood Release) Awakening
70%: Eternal Mangekyō Sharingan
80%: Rinnegan
90%: Jinchūriki of the Ten-Tails
100%: Rinne-Sharingan
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Shiro's eyes widened slightly as he read the updated list. It was far better than the system's previous version. His excitement grew when he reached the line about the Seven Chakra Natures.
"All seven..." he whispered to himself, a small smile creeping onto his face. "That means Lava Release, Dust Release... The possibilities are endless."
As he was imagining the techniques he could create, another notification popped up before his eyes:
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System Fully Updated!
Two New Functions Unlocked:
1. Multi-Travel System: Travel to any fictional universe at will.
2. Point System + System Shop: Earn points for every significant change you make in a universe. Use these points to purchase items, techniques, or abilities from the System Shop.
Shiro leaned against the sink, absorbing the information.
"Travel to any fictional universe..." he murmured. "That's... insane." His mind raced with the possibilities—worlds to explore, powers to gain, and people to meet.
The second function intrigued him just as much. A shop tied to his actions? A way to grow stronger by actively shaping the worlds he visited?
"This system just became a game-changer," Shiro said, a determined glint in his eyes.
For the first time in weeks, he felt genuinely excited about what lay ahead. Whatever challenges the system had in store for him, he was ready.
Progress: 25.31%
Template: Madara Uchiha
[System Status]
Strength: 50
Endurance: 52
Speed: 48
Reiatsu Control: 51
Intelligence: 49
Battle Instinct: 53
[Abilities]
Sharingan (3nd Tomoe):
Enhanced tracking of fast movements, with greater accuracy.
Can cast basic genjutsu, manipulating the opponent's perception.
Can copy techniques such as Zanjutsu, Hakuda, and Kidō with near-perfect accuracy, adapting them for personal use.
Hollow Detection: Sense the presence of
Hollows.
[Techniques Unlocked]
Water Style: Water Prison Jutsu
Shunpo
Byakurai
Shō
Reiatsu Strengthening
Moeru Danmaku
Water Style: Water Shark Bullet
Kaidō
Shadow Clone Jutsu
Bakudō: Sai
Bakudō: Hainawa
Wind Style: Gale Palm
Earth Style: Mud Wall
Fire Release: Ash Pile Burning
Summoning Jutsu to Kitsune's
Lightning Style: Chidori
Fire Release: Great Fire Annihilation
[Asauchi Imprinting Progress]
Current Bond Level: 85%
État de l’alimentation hebdomadaire
-- Classement
Power Stone 
-- Power
stone