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Blades of Balance: Trials of the Hydro Archon Focalors
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Not my fanfic. i only share
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Bored of her mundane life, Furina yearns to experience something new. Luckily, her wish was about to come true as a man with a mysterious past enters her life. Our protagonist, gifted with extraordinary swordsmanship and an undying spirit embarks on an unexpected journey as he rediscovers himself. Could this be the man she has been waiting for all her life, the one that could save her from this seemingly never ending loop? There was more to him than meets the eye, but that was a risk she was willing to take. As Neuvillette watches with concern, Furina revels in the chaos that unfolds.
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Author's Note: This will be a very long fanfic but that doesn't mean the story is slow paced. This fanfic was initially written about 1 month before Fontaine's release but most of the chapters are after 4.0. Why did I choose an OC? Because I felt like Furina deserves better. She needs someone that can truly understand her. Hence, I had to make up my own character. The story gets quite steamy at times and has violent fight scenes as well so its not for everyone. But if you're someone that enjoys an action packed, romantic fanfic with some drama here and there, then this is for you.
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Another Shakespeare wannabe. if you want to hear about tapestries of this and that, a sword fight equal to elegant ethereal dance and beauty blah blah blah... then go ahead and read it. Not my cup of tea.
The moment I read Furina's personality I quit reading and immediately review I love Furina, But this "Furina" is not the Furina I know, and for Neuvillitte I don't know who is this "Neuvillitte". You changed the character's personality COMPLETELY.
No idea who the original author is but they completely butchered the personality of every character for one they turned Furina into a sadistic pric who interrupted a trial(which Neuvilette just let her do) then she started to stab and cut the MC up, which was just moved past completely after he started simping over her like a dog, Navia acts like Taylor Swift when she is known to be one of the kindest people in Fontaine. The only person who is close to being portrayed correctly is Wriothsley who was in one scene so far
Should've put ooc in the synopsis. Furina is not acting like a Furina at all. Abandoning trial even for Furina is always prohibited. Forced everything but props to your writing tho.