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Auteur: Domn

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Chapitre 1: The Summon

In a dark room that has the size of two basketball courts. there were 40 men and women. Their ages were between 15 and 17 years, and their faces were filled with fear and confusion.

"Where is this place?. I was in my room from a moment, what is happening here?," a girl that seems to be 15-16 years said that. her eyes were full of tears.

"What the fuck is this?. I was with my friends! how did I get here?,"a young man started to shout while his face is full of fear.

"Where is my phone? it was with me from a moment"

"My phone is not here as well"

"Where is my wallet? my watch is not here also!!"

This situation was repeated every where, they all lost their phones and all of their belongings. At the middle of all of this fear and panic, only one man kept him self calm. This man's name is Allen Chrisford. Although he lost his calmness at the beginning, he regained it fast and started to analyse the situation.

( What happened? how did i appear here out of sudden?, this is illogical!). Allen thought. He knew that what happened requests him to throw his logic into the nearest trash can.

"Ahhhhh my eyes!!!" suddenly, a very bright light appeared causing everyone to cover their eyes with their hands and to scream in pain. After a while, the light vanished letting everyone to be able to open their eyes.

After they opened them, their faces turned white and they wished that they didn't open their eyes ever. They saw a big man sitting on a big thrown wearing a black armor. Besides him there was a green-eyed-haired man wearing glasses and a black suit.

(Oh god.... and now what?) When Allen looked at them he couldn't stop a bitter smile from appearing on his face.

"WHO ARE YOU?! ARE YOU THE ONES WHO BROUGHT US HERE?" A young man gathered his courage and asked.

"yes, my master is the one who brought you here" The green-haired man replied.

"F*CK YOU AND YOUR MASTER! I WILL CALL THE POLICE SO IT IS BETTER FOR YOU TO RETURN US BACK TO WHERE WE WERE!" The same guy said this while screaming.

(What a fool, does he think that the police will be helpful in such a situation? also all our phones had disappeared, so how he will call them?) Allen looked at that guy thinking that he is the most stupid human on earth.

After hearing what the young man said, a flash of light appeared in the green-haired man's eyes and he immediately disappeared from his place and appeared right beside the young man. he swung his hand into the young man's neck and cut it causing a blood fount to appear from where his neck originally was.

"no insult is allowed toward my master"

"aaaaaaaah" Almost everyone started to scream because those young people who came from a peaceful world can't take this bloody scene. They fell on the ground while screaming and the others started vomiting. Even Allen who have a very calm personality couldn't hold his face expressions from changing.

Suddenly, a terrifying halo spread causing all the sounds and noises to stop.

"SHUT UP! IF NOT I DON'T MIND TO REDUCE YOUR NUMBERS MORE" For the first time, the man in the black armor talked.


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Domn Domn

hello everyone!!! this is my first novel! and i know that this chapter is short but i uploaded it so that i can take your opinion about it. english is not my first language as you can see so i want your opinions about it, was it good? which grammer or context do you think i need to improve? pls make a comment and help me! and i will upload as many chapters as i can to pay you back!

thank you!

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