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Ben 10/MCU: Under Going Editing
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Synopsis
The year is 2023 Ben Stewart is a genius orphan, who at the age of ten finished high school, and spent the better part of 8 years in college.
Earning several degrees in engineering, he also been practicing martial arts for the better part of 8 years.
Finally entering into the workforce he finds himself unhappy. For the most part about the type of people he has to deal with daily. Coming back from work after having another stressful day at work.
He couldn't help but say to himself " Please if there is someone out there who could take me away from all this madness I'm dealing with. Please do it now otherwise..."
As he said these words Ben didn't realize that this would be the being of his journey through another universe. " What is that Iron Man?"
" Why do all the heroes and villains look like celebrities? And why do I suddenly have the Omnitrix?
Character Bio
NAME:
Benjamin Alexander Stewart (Formerly)
Benjamin Stewart Tennyson
HOME WORLD
Earth 5554 (Formerly)
Earth 2000089
RESIDENTS:
New York Manhattan
AGE:
18 (time of story)
HEIGHT
6 foot 1(1,88 meters)
OCCUPATION
Superhero/ Vigilante
Mechanical Engineer/Civil engineering
Programmer (self-taught)
Entrepreneur
ABILITIES
Enhanced Eidetic Memory
Freestyle Hand-To-Hand Combatant
Advance Marksmanship With Throwing Weapons
Spontaneous Learning/Understanding
EQUIPMENT
Omnitrix (restored prototype)
Étiquettes
Fans
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Manipulable protagonist with no backbone who literally assaults him and takes his things and he shows no sign of disgust or anger, simply pathetic [img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap]
Honestly Disappointing Most MCU and Ben 10 crossover just portray Ben as weak willed guy and depowering him more than he was in the original series. The fic started strong but the moment things got real the MC just folded........ But the author gave a note and some explanation about it so I will hold on my further judgement for this fic and give it a second chance. I really the author has some good reasoning.
Spoiler de révélation
Mc just got attacked and contained in a cell and then he starts cooperating with them as nothing happened
I am sorry I try to be positive but your making the MC a push over. if you didn't do that this story will be better if you fix it I am sure it will get more better reviews.
MC is a cuck, shield tranquilized him and locked him up, and he just got up and helped them, like what kind of brain dead MC is this? does the author have no self respect
Dumb MC. Claims to be genius but gets easily bullied and threatened. Gets easily subdued by so called monkeys and got stripped naked . Very poor character and story development.
The MC is probably a bigger threat than the Hulk in this story and S.H.I.E.L.D. treats him as if he were a 5-year-old, very bad protagonist dumb and weak both physically and mentally
I can't believe it's so hard to find a Ben 10 fic in marvel that's at least so-so, they're all bad and this is no exception, a very silly and manipulable protagonist who thinks he's a genius and is dumber than a rock
You are doing well, I can more or less get what you trying to convey form your writing but not all readers have the patience to understand the words. Try to flesh out the Mc's thoughts and emotions a bit. A sentence here and there. Trust me, it will work wonders. As for the progress of strength I am satisfied. The bashing is that Mc just made a Omake joke while Sheild assaulted him and made him uncounsiouss and literally tried to steal Omnitrix. So without, Ben's thoughts on matter, the scene will look he is a pushover.
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I'm going to be honest I like this a lot dude keep going you got this man do not leave this behind you're doing all right dude I believe you're going to do good
please I need more oh and I love your work I hope you have bright and wonderful life your fan from south Africa
A dumb and weak MC who is easily manipulated [img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap]