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being a side character of novel
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Synopsis
what will happen if you wake up in a novel sira was a normal salary girl but died one day in a car accident.
when she thought she is dead she found herself in the weird atmosphere tied up inside a old looking carriage.
confused (why I'm here)
fear(what is happening)
determination(of being strong)
greed (of power)
how will she survive this bloody battle field filled danger everywhere but she must survive.
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- Qualité de l’écriture
- Stabilité des mises à jour
- Développement de l’histoire
- Conception des personnages
- Contexte du monde
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so I continued reading on, after giving my last review (rates at 2 & 1/2 stars), and decided to renew my said review. although the writing quality is still poor (ik you're trying Mr Translator/Author and thankyou for that), it has at least improved somewhat. If you can get past said writing quality, then it's worth the read /try, since the story is quite interesting. The novel is good, just held back by the writing quality and update stability. Ps; Author/Translator-nim. I recommend trying to find someone fluent in English to edit your work before posting. you might be able to find an editor for free amongst your followers, who's willing to help, if not and have available funds, you can try finding an editor through fiver or something similar. Grammarly or an AI editing software may be of help but idk how much. i hope those recommendations may be of help to you ☺️
terrible writing quality as usual, disappointed but not surprised...