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Aubert's Odyssey: Harbinger of Hope
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Synopsis
In the vast Omniverse, a dire entity named Desoloth emerges, posing an existential threat by consuming universes.
Aubert, a solitary figure skilled in arcane arts, opposes Desoloth's destructive path. Despite Desoloth's might, Aubert manages to temporarily contain the entity within an alternate dimension.
However, understanding the temporary nature of this victory, Aubert embarks on a quest to seek the aid of an alternate version of himself in a realm rich with magic, believing this variant to be the Harbinger of Hope.
This alternate Aubert is envisioned as the key to achieving a lasting solution to the threat Desoloth poses.
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Author's Note:
-First volume would be kind of slow as it would be about Aubert's childhood but there would be a time-skip I swear!
-This is my first time writing in Webnovel, so constructive criticism is welcome!
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You know, so far, Aubert is pretty talented. So, I'm kind of afraid if this kid would even be considered as weak when he's showing too much power at his age. But since this is your first novel, I'd say you're doing a good job. [img=coins][img=exp][img=fp][img=recommend]
The grammar is great. Stability of updates is questionable since this is new. Story Development is okay, my preferences are usually those who belong to nobodies and has to work their way up. Aubert is blessed so far, but I'm judging too early. Characters are well designed so far. I like the color Red, so I'm a bit biased. The world is vast, but I wish you didn't put an info dump in the first chapter and let us gradually explore the world. Anyways, for being a first timer, the book is pretty good. Keep up the good work! [img=coins][img=exp][img=recommend]
The concept of the power system in this novel is really unique and though i’ve seen many characters like Aubert reading this novel was a good fresh breath of air, knowing the mc is written well with their overpowered abilities.
Okay, here are my thoughts so far. The grammar is great. Though you could use some simple words from time to time for General Audiences. Updates stability: I have no comments so far since this is new. Story Development: This book has the tags of "WeakToStrong" yet Aubert is showing too much power at a young age. Character Design: I like the combination of red hair and green eyes. It felt unique. World Background: I like how vast the world is so far, I hope we can further explore in future chapters. Overall, the book is pretty good. For a first timer, you're doing a great job.
Do you like a curious, adventurous, and creative, but also naive, impulsive, and reckless protagonist? Then, this is for you. Meet Aubert, he often gets into trouble because of his magic. He is loyal to his friends and family, and seeks to learn more about his origins and his destiny.