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3.21 (17 audimat)
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Born as sasuke's and karin's son.Find how our mc spends his time in boruto universe trolling boruto, fighting powerful characters and eventually becoming overpowered.This will be AU i will insert characters,change story to make it interesting.There will be harem,no beta mc,no netorare.I don't own naruto and boruto
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Écrire un avisAuthor should read more quality novels and fic to understand how to write. Powers are nice and all but writing ability of author needs to be of higher level to have any chance to create a good fic with op mc.
No other reason than the grammar, use of emoji’s, and lack of <Space> usage. Everything is a jumble mess, and a pain to read. I’ll be checking up on this review to see if author deletes it.
The author tries to add stuff from other anime but it directly goes against canon and that just turned me off
Hello author here. Guys read this book and give me some pointers as i am new . Please give review to increase rating 😅😅😅😅😅😅😅😅😅😅😅😅😅😅😅😅😅😅😅😅😅😅😅😅😅😅😅😅😅😅😅😅😅😅😅😅😅😅😅😅😅😅😅😅😅😅😅😅😅😅😅😅😅😅😅😅😅😅😅😅😅😅😅😅😅😅😅😅😅😅😂😂😅😅😂😂😂😂😂😂😂
I really like it so far and I hope for more chapters and that the author doesn't drop it. [img=recommend]
Hey guys I am back . Read the new stories and like and review if you like. 😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄
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Hey guys this is my first book and first chapter. I will post chapter based on your reaction. Please read this book and comment if you like it. Till then bye
chapters are way to short, even with the unless re-caps, and run on sentences that feel like they are put in just to extend the content. Author needs to trim these down loose the recaps, and put more appropriate content and thought into the chapters. the stories isn't completely trash the potential plot line if he takes his time and improve he writing could make it a pretty good read. but I am dropping this one.
it's a good novel buuuuur it's rough like it's more of a draft and the wording/dialog hasn't been polished you honestly just need to read other fics and see how the wording is used/smooth it is if your having trouble getting it to work. other than that it's a pretty good story it's just the execution and dialog.
Spoiler de révélationJust readable don't look at stars i gave but it's just...*not very good*cough cough..... 🙃🙃🙃🙃🙃🙃🙃🙃🙃🙃🙃🙃🙃🙃🙃🙃🙃🙃🙃🙃🙃🙃🙃🙃🙃🙃🙃🙃🙃🙃🙃🙃🙃🙃🙃🙃🙃🙃🙃🙃🙃🙃🙃🙃🙃👍
Hermano Te doy un consejo Haz que pase el tiempo más rápido porque la historia se está volviendo aburrida vas a perder lectores y sigues así Gracias por el capítulo no te desanimes
Spoiler de révélationAuteur itachirocks
I hope there are no yuri and clones . .