Ars Goetia: The Six Shards of Dantalion

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KylePower

Hi, I'm the Author of this book. I want to first say that I appreciate all of your continued support for this book🙏. To my dedicated readers, I appreciate all your feedback and the time you've given to this story in order for me to improve. This novel was started 3 years ago as a passion project and I will continue doing so. This book that I'll be writing will have a mix of action, romance, adventure and mystery. There's a lotta lore behind this, so feel free to investigate or search terms up yourself if you don't understand anything. PS: Marcus and Clara say Hello! 👋

This is so good for a high schooler good job. Make sure to keep going and enjoy yourself while writing don’t tire yourself out trying to put as many chapters as possible.

this is a pretty incredible novel i must say. i went into this not thinking to much and i can honestly say I'm really impressed. i love your style of writing and the word building you've done and i will props stick around if you decide to continue this to the end. thanks for giving me something to look forward to : )

some parts of the story could be improved, but overall it is good. The characters suit their personality really well, I do think that you should work on some grammar and some words are used in weird context. Overall a good read.

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Zach_Curry

Interesting concept and nice world building. First few chapters seem a little slow and doesn't flow well. Overall would recommend a read. Not for everyone.

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Nougatesse

This book is a bit more fancy than others (which I personally prefer). Plot is good so far, it builds on more and more information and it gets kinda interesting later on. Suspenseful, Characters are pretty cool and as a shipper, I will do Wallace x Isla.

这是个十分有趣的故事，这个故事的情节犹如天马行空，是个关于冒险，玄幻热血的故事。我十分的敬佩这位作者的丰富想象力，这故事丰富的开拓了读者的想象力和思维能力，其中的情节更能把人带入其中，让人乐此不疲。个人非常喜欢这个故事情节，十分推荐对于那些喜欢玄幻故事的人阅读。希望作者可以继续写出更多类似的故事，本人十分期待下一部作品。

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Christopher_Tang

Very good book, however the first few chapters could have a more better delivery, as it is confusing in come parts of the story. Anyways HALO

Solid work. It's considered on the long end but it's a different kind of read. It's pretty unique in writing style Nice job. I think chapters should be split up a bit more e.g. around 1.5k to 2.5k but take this as a pinch of salt. Overall, good so far.

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TheRandomEpicNoob

pretty good! but ive only read the first chapter. some grammatical errors, maybe can build world a bit better, yup! have to fill out characters lol

I love the work, keep it up. I hope you balance your school life and this novel. Some minor issues but they don't shy away the greatness of this novel.

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Abhav_Gupta

Love the potential of the novel, it has great thought behind it. I love it so far. While the past tense does sometimes slip, it doesn't distract from the overall emotions. For a High School Student great work, I recommend that you read this.