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Apocalyptic World: I've Got The Second System
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Synopsis
Seventeen-year-old Seth's mundane existence takes an astonishing twist when he hears a divine proclamation from God.
The world teeters on the edge of an apocalyptic event, but instead of the typical chaos and destruction, God transforms it into a challenge.
A challenge where every human receives a unique system and concealed abilities, all in the name of survival.
"Shit! What should I do?"
I could hardly hear my own voice as I faced imminent death. In the midst of the darkness, a woman's voice taunted me.
"What an intriguing human, on the verge of death, aren't you?"
Yes, I am! Please, stop talking and let me pass in peace.
"How about I offer you a chance? You need to help me escape, and I believe you're the only one who can."
How could I possibly do that?
"Yes, yes, just form a pact with me. I'll grant you the victory you desire most, and in return, I'll gain my freedom. But it won't be without a cost. I'll bestow upon you the Ouroboros curse."
Are you seriously presenting me with this choice while I'm on the brink of death? Ugh, do I even have a choice?
As I resolved to accept, I heard a voice.
[Downloading the new system]
[100% success]
[The new system connects to the server]
[100% success]
[Incognito mode: activated]
[Welcome to the second system, Tiamat]
Huh!? I have two systems now!?
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✨AMAZING✨! That's all I could say... Just kidding. A wonderful creation, with details beyond expectation, a clear worldbuilding, and beautiful grammar all throughout. I haven't read much to say more, but I'll be giving this 5⭐from what I've read alone. Great work, author! More chapters~!
This story left me breathless! It's pure adrenaline and suspense. The characters are so realistic and captivating that you can't help but get excited with every twist of the plot. The action is impressive, and the moments of battle against various enemies keep you on the edge of your seat. The writing is full of details that immerse you in this post-apocalyptic world, and the character development is simply incredible! Excellent!
the storytelling is great. the world details are nice, giving me the same vibe as Gantz-0. I am not at chapter 13 but most characters that had been introduced and become a part of their little group are males. I hope you can also add female characters as well. Keep writing.
This book is GREAT. One of the best I have read in weeks. You deserve 5K popularity and 6 power stones (Which is what I have given you.)
It's pretty good I ain't gonna lie. I can't say that I will read it whenever I can, but it will be one of my top 5 choices when I want to read something. 👍
The premise seems intriguing with a unique twist on apocalyptic events. It keeps you wondering what's next and how the protagonist will navigate this new world with dual systems. Looking forward to seeing where the story goes.
Wow. This is probably one of the greatest stories written by a first-timer in WebNovel. I can't believe the sheer quality of this book, and I find it fantastic. Please keep up the good work, dear Writer, and I hope you get vetted soon so I can drop you some power stones!
My overall feedback: 1 - It lacks a unique flavor for the MC in his usage of words and descriptions. I mean, to embed when he is describing things with his personality. Be it sarcasm, funny jokes to cope with the stress, and so on. 2 - Some scenes is a bit confuse even for a Apocalipse scene. I know its challenging, but I think that when you hit right in the unique voice for your MC, things will happen more naturally. 3 - Try to avoid repeating some words, like 'eerie', 'cacophony'. All in all, you have a new reader, keep up the good work :)
Off the bat cover is insanely impressive, I would gauge that your synopsis needs a little more oomf, but I assume you will eventually correct that way it attracts more users. I think its a great premise and is promising! Thanks read author!
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Okay so like I found this novel while glancing through and my eyes were drawn to this fun piece! I dunno how no one thought of this one before, but I know its gonna kick butt!
The beginning page already tells us this mc is gonna go through heck, but nice he seemed to meet a bestie along the way or at least someone he knew allowing a sense of familiarity. I am impressed already!
From the very start of the book you can see how charming it is where you know it is and such a unique type of apocalyptical theme that drew me in from the start. I wonder how the author will progress the works as they continue. I value the fun intensity driving the mc.
Really great story you have here author. I like how the reader knows how the apocalypse began while still keeping bits of mystery going. The mc is quite the interesting character, definitively not your typical apocalypse mc. Anyway keep up the good work
This book is incredible. Reading all through the chapters got me hooked and made me feel like I was there. Very detailed descriptions! I did find some errors but just a few, other than that, everything is well written. Keep up and will be waiting for the next update! ❤️🔥❤️🔥❤️
As an author, I will give my novel four stars! This is my first ML novel that used the first POV. So sorry for the mistake I made along the way. I'm gonna use this review section for any question that you might have! Enjoy reading