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Another Life : A New Journey Starts.
3.76 (10 audimat)
Synopsis
A man who has been lost, and thinks that he cannot go on anymore to that dream that he wants to follow. Have given another chance to do what he really wanted, to soar high up.
Follow him, Kim Jun Ho. With his new friends, that will be soaring high up together.
Entry for Contest 66- BTS Writing Competition.
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This story has a nice plot but due to misuse of prepositions and articles it actually makes it difficult to read. I don't understand when they are talking in past tense and present tense. It's really meesed up....I hope you continue writing this story with this advice... good work though! Fighting!!🥰👍😘🤩
its not bad? but author isnt really writing much of the story. i like the cover btw its cute. however it would be better if you wrote more but its ok
So far....so long...it's interesting and consistent. I like it!!!❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️
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It was deserving to win in this competition Because i think the author is very sincere of what he/she is doing ...and I feel it So I want this story to spoil to everyone even though I don't know them... So I wanna support this book!😃
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Good story. Nice plot. Love the characters. Keep up the good work. And keep making new stories. Awesome job. Excited to more of your works. Fighting!! ❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️
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