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Ancient Vampire in a Modern World
4.01 (33 audimat)
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A vampire who just woke up after his long hibernation, and found out that he have been hibernating for far too long that the world he knows, and the ones he knew as the strongest race was now extinct and only are stated in legends.
Being new to this world watch Vladimir on his journey in this new world as he dominates the world and uncover the mysteries that lies within it.
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This novel is very boring at first 20 or so chapters and my grammar is not really that good but I promised I will try my best to Improve.
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I GET IT!! I GET IT!! HAHAHA I think I get it... The biggest misunderstanding of all haha!! I won't spoil anymore. I almost drop this book because of it but then, haha. The author doesn't want to explain it so I won't spoil anymore.. This is already my second review lol. But the grammar still need improvement though. Hope this won't drop.
Who the hell is Keiji!?... Isn't the mc name Vlad and Scott?... I don't mind about those naming sense(Klyzer and the other)..... Well the plot is good at least(Even thought he was supposed to be old monster but those cliche... whatever).. also the heroine development was too hastened... Overall it's good... just good no more or less... In my personal opinion
............................................................................. Anyo! Nice book Bro! I love it! though the first chapters were boring. But later it was nice. Salamat Sayo for your Hard work. Hoping for more in the future.
The grammar is some of the worst I’ve ever read and I’m hoping it eventually gets better. The story has great potential, however in the first two chapters it’s completely garbage.
This is a gem please don't drop soon. I like his style and aahhhh...... Nevermind!!! [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
Writing quality could do with a bit of work, especially with punctuation marks and all. Overall nice one hopefully, it doesn't get dropped.
Probably one of the worst novels i've read, thousands of years old mc but falls in love with a teenage girl, the mc can't even control his emotional behavior despite being so old, furthermore please correct your grammar, It's he for male and she for female.
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I'm sorry I really tried I really really tried to read this but it's just so bad work on grammar a little get your story straight then I'll start reading again
Learn the diffrence between He and she FFS I get that sentence can be wrong grammer can be misleading but I am on ch 30 there is still same mistake annoying AF anyway thank for the effort
It felt like a typical vampire story at first, but then it turned out to be a time-shift case, idea is kind of uniquely hidden inside the story- and I can feel there is many mysteries hidden inside this plot!
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this story, but I have no idea why it stopped at 114th chapter . Did the author drop it? will this continue to update? I sincerely hope this novel gets more chapters while maintaining its quality thus far
This book is amazing, keep going! Can't stop reading. Can't wait to see more. Do you have any social media that I can follow so I can know when you gonna update?
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While the story is not bad, it lacks direction, consistency, and quality excitement. The mc does not have much of a goal or task that he is actively moving towards. Not to mention the many contradictions for the mc's behavior, for being a over several hundred years, he has the emotional fluctuation of a teenage girl on her period. As for the fight scenes, you might as well skim them, they are not great and often confusing (there was one fight in game against a team of rangers- 2 melee and 2 range with the same weapons and no distinguishing characteristics between them- so one of them seemed to go super saiyan and the other was just there. he also seemed a bit pretentious with giving the characters a bola as a weapon)
You limit the abilities of the mc. Like wtf, why did you even do that?? He is ridiculously strong but you slowed down his growth in game by 90%. You didn't even spare his experience acquisition. You made one of the richest person on the planet mc's slave but you can't even make the mc ride a care to school?? Creativeness man. Do you know that word? Be creative but don't exaggerate it. Dropping it.
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good story so far. Author I'm curious I'd you need a beta reader/Editor? I'm good with English vocab and Grammer. I dont need any money. Please feel free to contact on discord, Fenris#6876
God awful writing quality. The story itself is pretty much written by a child. The author is tunneling the story and not really expanding on the world too much. There are tons of mistakes that are so easy to spot that it makes reading it hard.