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All-people machine war: I started with a strong attack freedom

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Auteur: Dankan

4.02 (11 audimat)

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Synopsis

(I only translated and edited.)

Through a parallel world, this world is actually an era of all-people mecha.

Get the mecha mall system, you can get mecha from film and television anime novels.

The opening newbie gift package draws the [Attack Freedom] design drawings, as well as a material package!

And [Raid Freedom] is just the beginning….

When the Red Knight [Infinite Justice] and the golden dawn [Dawn Gundam] landed in this world, a generation of mecha gods rose.

And in the end, when Lin Tian appeared in a [Super Galaxy Red Lotus Spiral Rock] that was larger than the observed universe, the entire universe would bow down under his feet.

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Rank -- Classement Power Stone
Stone -- Power stone

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4.02

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ShadowFlamePhoenix

not personally about this book but is it just me who feels like breaking someone's spine reading Wieard translations like this?

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Wind_Speaker000

This is one of the best mech based stories I have read in quite a while. I like the method of progression and the character personalities that are present in the story. Author keep up the good work this is a great story and look forward to reading more.

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Zachary_Comodore

this was amazing I really do love this I only got four chapters left I feel like the writing is good and I need more I fight this would be a good point to stop but also feel like is you keep going it'll be even better it got loud you got a lot of potential and I think this is one of the best written novel I seen I write this in my top 10 I have seen so far[img=update]

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0rion_19

what is the original novel name? and where can i find it?

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V01DBL00D

first lets break down the story with the basics then my personal opinion writing quality: could use some work but every story does that doesnt get a proper book will happen to it so, its not someting new here, you can make sense of what is being said. updates until i believe is the end of the book on ch113 since theres no been updates as of this date, it was steady and good story development i give it a 1.5/2*, the hole concept was great even i couldnt help but wanting more on the first chapter, tough gacha and clasic cliches where there not a problem, then it happen, story progresion was sent trough the window, hey you want an op mech at the begining, you got it, you want a history with basically little to no rough spots for development, here we go, love interest? so sudden and forced feeling that give the sense of not being developed, plot? clasic mc goes op and conquers universe in a mere 113 chapters that even the enemies feel like, "was it always this easy to get (s rank mech?, give life to mech?, make combiners/megazords?; zoids? or even gurren lagan lvl mech?)" the answer the story gives is yes and the fights last like 1 up to 3 chapters, easy to read and have a laugh yes, good story? i would say in middle of yes and no, for the points before. characters: barely any important characters where introduced, some even forgothen by the middle and little to none character development outside of main cast that is a small number to begin with. world background: now this is why yes, the world is someting it could at the bery least story book lvl, heck if writed right it could even become a great hit to become a small series/cartoon/manga/weebtoon. why? how many stories tread at the concep of creating mechs in a society where everyone can, world danger lvl extintion or survival, reaching up to the stars? not many but has the potential. final toughts: my rating would be 3* but 3.2 its good enough, worth your time? yes if you just want to read someting to pass time, story wise not as much, feel like someting i would read again just for killing time, finally the concept is really good and i love it, custom making is a 5* in my book but the "lets make a gundam like freedoom" is what i feel somewhat sad, no exploration trough the other universes to add to them and mash them up, no tecnology studiying o mix and match to create someting new and lastly no new mech concept that hasnt been touched before. recomendation if you are interested in a history similar but more trough it would be infinite machine war, has 1k+ chapts with similar concept but longer story

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akiro_isagawa

i like this kind of novel can anyone recommend me like this?

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LightDarkness_star

a good fanfic but did boy finished 😔, but I like it so much that why go author do you best

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Zachary_Comodore

we're good good Payson beautiful Miracles and series me more like a lot more chapters👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍😄

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Steven_Khing_7555

It is from Faloo National Aircraft warfare:I created a Strike Freedom from the beginning

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Genesis_Primordial

where can I find the original so that I can read more of it

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CatofAbbys

Translation Quality is the same as that of MTL... I can just use google translate and read the raws which has a better translation than this...

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