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Adventure Time: Primordial Monster
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Noah is an abnormal child with an abnormal backstory. Born into a world filled with adventure and mystery, he must not only deal with his own inner demons, but also help a few others deal with theirs as well.
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-Update Schedule will be around one to three chapters every Sunday, though this may change as the story’s pace starts picking up and gaining momentum.
-I will be trying really hard to ensure that the writing quality of this story is as high as possible, however if you believe that I could word something better, or find a typo while reading, please do let me know so I can fix it.
-Constructive feedback is welcome, just be respectful in your critiques and don’t be rude if there is no need to be. Any and all toxic comments will be deleted by yours truly in order to ensure a pleasant reading experience for everyone else.
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I have high hope for this fanfic, it is an intriguing concept that I don’t think I’ve seen in the rare few adventure time fanfics I have seen. Hopefully there are plenty of chapters to come in the future, keep up the good work Author!!!!!!! ………………………………………………………………………… ………………………………………………………………………… ………………………………………………………………………… ………………………………………………………………………… ………………………………………………………………………… …………………………………………………………………………
please give me more. I need this there isn't that many adventure time fanfics
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I think this is a really good adventure time fic and I love the idea of it. It’s really well done and is overall just good. The only thing I would change would be the name for the counterpart to Golb, and that change being to call him Glob. Glob is often used a ton in adventure time to replace the word for God.
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Looks promising so goooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooood
Writing Quality: The grammar and flow is smooth so far. Great descriptions. 5 stars. Updating Stability: I’m only giving three stars so far, as I have to wait for more updates to happen. Then I’ll get a better feel. 3 stars. Story Development: Similar to update stability, I need more to give more stars. So far so good! 3 stars. Character Design: I love how you are expanding on the cosmic beings of adventure time! Adding counterparts to Golb and new primordials is a sure fire way to grab my attention. 5 stars. World Backround: I love the expansion of the lore so far. It is small, but I can see great things on the horizon! 5 stars. Keep up the good work! And as the lich says: Here’s your gold star!
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