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A Gamer Challenge Fucked Me Over
4.61 (15 audimat)
Synopsis
Every time you read about someone getting a 'Gamer System' it generally places them at the right fucking time period for your knowledge about whatever universe you have chosen.
Onyx gained the Gamer System but now she has to figure out how to stay alive for, or travel 1000 years to the future so that she can actually use the knowledge she knows about the HP Universe.
Tags: OP, Dark, System, Transmigration, Yuri, Futa, HP Verse, Magic, R-18+, Time Travel, more that I am to lazy to put in right now.
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I quite like this and it has potential, I hope that you update this and not drop it. I definitely recommend this and I also love how you portray the character, calm but easily annoyed if its excuse able.
Till now it has been pretty solid. The update stability is non existent but still better than many others.
Warning Spoilers!!! I am unsure if I Like or hate this novel, but it has generally infuriated me. It keeps breaking established rules. Why can she one shot insta kill being 700+ levels above her, why even bother with a leveling system. You had a plotline that you could follow but ignore it and throw it away by yeeting her into a different world. You twist her personality extremely, essentially having the system indirectly controlling her actions. This could have been so good. Tone done the slaughter arrays, don't just spawn her into the world as the legit greatest rune mage in the HP verse. I like the lay line twist but tone down the power. You already have a nice plot, make the centaur elder and unicorn lower level, get rid of the Universal travel entirely for now and boom perfect. The first plot would now be she iIreborn in the HP world finds a lay line, slice of life building her home setting up defenses and learning rune magic. Then eventually a centaur elder gets caught up in one of her formation and dies and thus we have some action and you can further build upon the world and the consequences of the death of that centaur elder as she grows stronger and protects the leyline for 200 years. But no.
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Great concept! I haven't read it yet, but we definitely need more ffs that take place quite a while before the main story or just distanced from the main cast, cuz that's way more interesting and new while still having a certain familiarity to it. Not just HP, but all fandoms, basically.
please don't drop. I can never find a good HP fanfic with a female lead. plus she's got a personality I can enjoy reading. PLEASE DON'T DROP!!!
Такова сюжета еще не читал, продолжай и я уверен попадешь далеко в топ. Главное не забрасывай слишком рано!—__-_-_—_—_—-_-_%-_-_-%-_—_-_-_—_-_-_-_—_-_
Do you have more stores anywhere other than webnovel? if so what's your name on other sites?
when the FUCK!!! is the new chapter coming out I've been waiting for FOREVER?????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????
I like your stories very much.They're very interesting. You do a great job
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villain mc with no warning tags - thinking of people as toys - setting up mass killing arrays ect trashy summoning/world traveling system no common sense it's like im reading something written by a child - lets make a house (cuts down trees) why not just use transfiguration mind palace ballshittery - lets sit down in an open space for 2 months opps... i forgot to eat/drink with no outside indications of this
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Whenever there is Yuri I'll be there! Please don't drop.