Synopsis
Our MC was the strongest being in the mortal plane,saving the world countless of times.
However, now he finally emerges in an ice capsule that has frozen him for 1500 years!!!! In this new advancement of this new world where people have levels and stronger then ever foes arise.
In this unknown world to him he learns that no one knows him as a hero from the past!!!
Join him in his adventure to decide whether this new age is worth protecting or destroying.
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Tags:Adventure,Action,weak to strong,magic,elements,martial arts,Levels.
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Dear ultra, I gave you 5 stars for the sake of encouraging you. However, be reminded that no work is perfect and you have a long way to go in terms of storytelling. Although I understand Jack's bewilderment when he was not recorded as a hero, added to the fact that he woke up 1500 years into the future, he's quite an unreasonable character who lets his emotions overtake his rationality. And that is considering that he was a great hero. It's hard for me to believe that he's one when he acts so immaturely. Other than Jack, no other characters stood out to me since they have no unique propensities that would make me remember them. Perhaps I'm being picky, but that's the actuality when I was reading the book. Perhaps it's because it was not elucidated properly, the world setting and the magic/levelling up system is quite hazy. I do know that you can level up by killing another living creature. Though, that dismisses some laws governed by nature. Instead of encouraging one to level up, the levelling up system encourages killing to grow strong. Since this is a novel that focuses on action, I would appreciate if the fight scenes are narrated in an extensive way, focusing on muscle/limb/eye movements and the altercation itself. It's quite an evasion on using mere onomatopoeias in narrating rather than actual movements. The exposition is quite lacking, if I may say. You often use adjective in describing things. Utilize the wonders of prose. Adeptly use figures of speech. Make the readers read what you're actually seeing in your mind. Also, I have qualms in the changing of POVs. I think it would be alright to stick to one POV, the omniscient one. In that way, you will be able to show Jack's thoughts and what's happening around him. Regarding the grammatical aspects of the story, I've noticed several mistakes. There were a lot of missing/misused punctuation marks leading to run-ons, incorrect verb tenses, absent modifiers, and questionable word choices. Withal, heed my words that these can be proofread really easily. I just pointed them out to let you know that your work could look even more beautiful. Furthermore, divide your condensed paragraphs. It's quite tiring to read such thick passages, and readers tend to skip something like them. Overall, the elements are quite dichotomized. I think you could merge the ideas a little more. Rest assured that you're potential as a writer will still grow. I will be supporting you! [Sorry for leaving such a bad review]
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This story is absolutly amazing i started randomly and got hooked i loves the characters and the story development of course there were grammatical issues but nobosy perfect
Ultra, I am getting hooked to this book. The way the plot unfolds is really nice. You are doing great and are on a road to get better. [img=recommend] I want to see where the plot goes and so want to see you get there. **: Guys, go on read the novel! You won't be disappointed <3
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At the beginning of the story, I was really skeptical I'm to going to lie. There were grammar mistakes, the characters seemed underdeveloped and I barely understood anything that happened due to the lack of deeper expansion of the world setting. But after spending some time working with Ultra to fix the mistakes, the plot started to make a lot more sense to me and although it may not have shone in the text yet, Jack started to undergo character changes that made him a much more understandable character. Overall, the story has a slow start. The beginning doesn't have the same hook as other stories may give but after a few chapters, you start to get more into the story and the characters that annoyed you at the beginning start to grow on you, It's a great read really, just don't give up at the beginning because you're going to regret it later
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Good story, grammar mistakes are there but, np as long as story is good it can be corrected, yes try this novel it's also a reincarnation type. Yes I promise that you won't feel disappointed.
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YO its the author of this novel! I can’t believe I am rating my own novel lol But hey...I need to attract readers! So I have to be a little shameless hehe. So this is my first ever story I am writing and I simply decided to do it because I felt like it lol. Plus I am enjoying writing and talking to other authors who provide me with help (thank god). This story may have silly grammar errors (one day maybe an editor will stroll by) and the updates may be slow but please be patient. I think I am getting better as my latest chapters are near 2k words. So I am hopeful that eventually I will have a more consistent update schedule but currently its like once a week. Now I am going to rate this 5 star cause I am very shameless and I love my work lol. Anyways please give this a chance or give me some feedback, to help improve it :)