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Very gud I love this noverl ๐ค๐ค๐ค๐ค๐ค๐ค๐ค๐ค๐ค๐ค๐ค๐ค๐ค๐ค๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐
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Very nice book. This is the best book I hv read so far. I love the characters name, the sinolicty of the setting and how the story is been developed. This is lovely
Very nice book. Im so much in love with this bppl especially luli how is growing nd how extraordinary he is becoming. I love d development of the chapters
Very nice book. Im so much in love with this bppl especially luli how is growing nd how extraordinary he is becoming. I love d development of the chapters
Very nice book. Im so much in love with this bppl especially luli how is growing nd how extraordinary he is becoming. I love d development of the chapters
Very nice book. Im so much in love with this bppl especially luli how is growing nd how extraordinary he is becoming. I love d development of the chapters
Very nice book. Im so much in love with this bppl especially luli how is growing nd how extraordinary he is becoming. I love d development of the chapters
Very nice book. Im so much in love with this bppl especially luli how is growing nd how extraordinary he is becoming. I love d development of the chapters
Very nice book. Im so much in love with this bppl especially luli how is growing nd how extraordinary he is becoming. I love d development of the chapters
Very nice book. Im so much in love with this bppl especially luli how is growing nd how extraordinary he is becoming. I love d development of the chapters
Very nice book. Im so much in love with this bppl especially luli how is growing nd how extraordinary he is becoming. I love d development of the chapters
Very nice book. Im so much in love with this bppl especially luli how is growing nd how extraordinary he is becoming. I love d development of the chapters
This book feel my heart and soul desires. Love it alot. I like how the story is been dveloped. The setting the theme bd every set up is cleanly been made up
This book feel my heart and soul desires. Love it alot. I like how the story is been dveloped. The setting the theme bd every set up is cleanly been made up
This book feel my heart and soul desires. Love it alot. I like how the story is been dveloped. The setting the theme bd every set up is cleanly been made up
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Nice BOOK! Siento que a Lu le falta cultivar mas, pasa mucho tiempo confiando en elemento externos en sus batallas... Aunque entiendo que a medida que avanza la trama se estรก convirtiendo en alguien capaz!
IT SAYS IN THE DESCRIPTION THAT HE BEDDED THE MOST BEAUTIFUL OF LADIES AND IN THE STORY IT IS SAID HIS SISTER IS THE MOST BEAUTIFUL OF WOMEN,SO CAN WE ASSUME HE IS GOING TO HAVE SEX WITH HIS SISTER?IF SO,LOOKS LIKE AN INCEST TAG IS INCOMING. AS OF NOW I HAVE READ TILL CHAPTER 100 AND HIS SISTER SEEMS PRETTY CONSERVATIVE SO I DON'T THINK IT IS GOING TO HAPPEN BUT THEN THE DESCRIPTION ABOUT BEDDING MOST BEAUTIFUL OF LADIES SHOULD BE CHANGED.
Overall it good but ther are some weak points. The story development is a little slow and it highlight points that don't necessarily need a whole chapter or more.
๐ฒ๐ค๐๐๐๐๐๐คค๐๐๐๐๐ด๐ซ๐ช๐ฏ๐ค๐ฎ๐ฅ๐ฃ๐๐๐ถ๐๐๐คจ๐ค๐คฉ๐๐๐๐คฃ๐๐๐ ๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐ฅฐ๐๐๐โบ๏ธ๐๐ค๐คฉ๐ค๐คจ๐๐๐ถ๐๐๐ฃ๐ฅ๐ฎ๐ค๐ฏ๐ช๐ซ๐ด๐๐๐๐๐คค๐๐๐๐๐๐ค๐ฒโน๐๐๐๐๐ค๐ข๐ญ๐ฆ๐ง๐จ๐ฉ๐คฏ๐ฌ๐ฐ๐ฑ๐ฅต๐ฅถ๐ณ๐คช๐ต๐ก๐ ๐คฌ๐ท๐ค๐ค๐คข
Enjoyed first few chapters when he's still struggling with his sister. When his sister taken by sect afterwards the story became boring, predictable and mc became retard, luckily i forgot this novel because i plan to stacking up and read later, after reading again by skipping chapters wow im glad i forgot this novel, otherwise im stacking chapters for disappointment.
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Looks good ๐๐๐๐๐ ๐ ๐๐๐ ๐ฏ๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐ ๐๐ ๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐ ๐๐ ๐๐๐๐๐๐๏ปฟ๐ค๐ค๐ค๐ค๐ค โโโ๐คโ โโ๐คโโ โ๐คโโโ ๐ค๐ค๐ค๐ค๐ค โ Sleepy โ Good Night ๐ค๐ ๐ Sweet Dream ๐ ๐ ๐ ๐ ๐ ๐ ๐ ๏ปฟ๐ค๐ค๐ค๐ค๐ค โโโ๐คโ โโ๐คโโ โ๐คโโโ ๐ค๐ค๐ค๐ค๐ค โ Sleepy โ ๏ปฟ๐ค๐ค๐ค๐ค๐ค โโโ๐คโ โโ๐คโโ โ๐คโโโ ๐ค๐ค๐ค๐ค๐ค โ Sleepy โ Good Night ๐ค๐ ๐ Sweet Dream ๐ ๐ ๐ ๐ ๐ ๐ ๐
Looks good ๐๐๐๐๐๐๐ ๐๐๐๐ฏ๐๐๐๐๐๐๐ฏ๐๐๐๐๐ฏ๐๐๐๐ฏ๐๐ ๐๐ ๐๐ฏ๐ฏ๐๐๐ฏ๐ ๐๐๐๐ ๐๐ ๐๐๐๐๐๐ฏ๐๐ฏ๐๐๐ฏ๐ ๐๐๐ฏ๐๐๐๐๐ ๐๐ ๐๐๐ ๐ฏ๐๐๐ฏ๐๐
๐ค๐๐๐ค๐ค๐ค๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐โบโบ๐โบ๐โบ๐๐โบโบ๐๐๐โบ๐๐๐โบ๐๐โบ๐โบโบ๐โบ๐โบ๐โบ๐โบ๐โบ๐โบ๐โบโบ๐โบ๐โบ๐โบโบ๐โบ๐โบ๐โบโบ๐๐โบ๐โบ๐โบโบ๐๐โบ๐โบ๐โบ๐โบ๐โบโบ๐โบโบ๐โบ๐โบโบ๐โบโบ๐โบ๐โบ๐โบ๐๐โบ๐๐โบ๐โบ๐โบ๐โบ๐โบโบโบ๐๐๐โบ๐โบ๐โบ๐๐๐โบ๐โบโบ๐โบ๐โบ๐โบ๐โบ๐โบ๐โบโบ๐โบ๐โบ๐โบ๐โบ๐โบ๐โบ๐โบโบ๐โบ๐โบ๐โบ๐โบโบ๐๐๐โบ๐โบ๐
Looks good ๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐ ๐๐ฏ๐๐๐ ๐๐ ๐๐ ๐ ๐๐ ๐๐๐ ๐๐ ๐ ๐๐ ๐๐ ๐๐๐ ๐๐ ๐ ๐๐๐๐๐๐๐ ๐ ๐๐๐ ๐๐ ๐๐ ๐๐ ๐๐ ๐๐๐๐ฏ๐ ๐๐๐ ๐ ๐๐ ๐๐๐ ๐๐ ๐ ๐๐๐ ๐ ๐๐๐ ๐๐ ๐๐ ๐๐
๐๐ค๐ค๐๐ค๐๐ค๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐ค๐๐ค๐๐คฉ๐๐ค๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐ค๐๐ค๐๐๐๐๐ค๐๐๐๐ค๐ค๐๐๐๐
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Love this book. Cull authors. Too happy ๐ ๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐
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Very gud I love this noverl ๐ค๐ค๐ค๐ค๐ค๐ค๐ค๐ค๐ค๐ค๐ค๐ค๐ค๐ค๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐
Spoiler de rรฉvรฉlation Very nice book. This is the best book I hv read so far. I love the characters name, the sinolicty of the setting and how the story is been developed. This is lovely
Very nice book. Im so much in love with this bppl especially luli how is growing nd how extraordinary he is becoming. I love d development of the chapters
Very nice book. Im so much in love with this bppl especially luli how is growing nd how extraordinary he is becoming. I love d development of the chapters
Very nice book. Im so much in love with this bppl especially luli how is growing nd how extraordinary he is becoming. I love d development of the chapters
Very nice book. Im so much in love with this bppl especially luli how is growing nd how extraordinary he is becoming. I love d development of the chapters
Very nice book. Im so much in love with this bppl especially luli how is growing nd how extraordinary he is becoming. I love d development of the chapters
Very nice book. Im so much in love with this bppl especially luli how is growing nd how extraordinary he is becoming. I love d development of the chapters
Very nice book. Im so much in love with this bppl especially luli how is growing nd how extraordinary he is becoming. I love d development of the chapters
Very nice book. Im so much in love with this bppl especially luli how is growing nd how extraordinary he is becoming. I love d development of the chapters
Very nice book. Im so much in love with this bppl especially luli how is growing nd how extraordinary he is becoming. I love d development of the chapters
Very nice book. Im so much in love with this bppl especially luli how is growing nd how extraordinary he is becoming. I love d development of the chapters
This book feel my heart and soul desires. Love it alot. I like how the story is been dveloped. The setting the theme bd every set up is cleanly been made up
This book feel my heart and soul desires. Love it alot. I like how the story is been dveloped. The setting the theme bd every set up is cleanly been made up
This book feel my heart and soul desires. Love it alot. I like how the story is been dveloped. The setting the theme bd every set up is cleanly been made up
Looks good ๐๐๐๐๐ ๐๐๐ ๐๐ ๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐ฏ๐๐๐ฏ๐๐๐๐ ๐๐ ๐๐๐๐ ๐๐ ๐๐ ๐ ๐๐๐๐๐๐๐ ๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐ ๐ ๐๐๐ฏ๐๐๐๐๐๐๐ ๐๐๐ ๐๐ ๐๐๐๐ ๐๐๐๐ฏ
Nice BOOK! Siento que a Lu le falta cultivar mas, pasa mucho tiempo confiando en elemento externos en sus batallas... Aunque entiendo que a medida que avanza la trama se estรก convirtiendo en alguien capaz!
IT SAYS IN THE DESCRIPTION THAT HE BEDDED THE MOST BEAUTIFUL OF LADIES AND IN THE STORY IT IS SAID HIS SISTER IS THE MOST BEAUTIFUL OF WOMEN,SO CAN WE ASSUME HE IS GOING TO HAVE SEX WITH HIS SISTER?IF SO,LOOKS LIKE AN INCEST TAG IS INCOMING. AS OF NOW I HAVE READ TILL CHAPTER 100 AND HIS SISTER SEEMS PRETTY CONSERVATIVE SO I DON'T THINK IT IS GOING TO HAPPEN BUT THEN THE DESCRIPTION ABOUT BEDDING MOST BEAUTIFUL OF LADIES SHOULD BE CHANGED.
Overall it good but ther are some weak points. The story development is a little slow and it highlight points that don't necessarily need a whole chapter or more.
๐ฒ๐ค๐๐๐๐๐๐คค๐๐๐๐๐ด๐ซ๐ช๐ฏ๐ค๐ฎ๐ฅ๐ฃ๐๐๐ถ๐๐๐คจ๐ค๐คฉ๐๐๐๐คฃ๐๐๐ ๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐ฅฐ๐๐๐โบ๏ธ๐๐ค๐คฉ๐ค๐คจ๐๐๐ถ๐๐๐ฃ๐ฅ๐ฎ๐ค๐ฏ๐ช๐ซ๐ด๐๐๐๐๐คค๐๐๐๐๐๐ค๐ฒโน๐๐๐๐๐ค๐ข๐ญ๐ฆ๐ง๐จ๐ฉ๐คฏ๐ฌ๐ฐ๐ฑ๐ฅต๐ฅถ๐ณ๐คช๐ต๐ก๐ ๐คฌ๐ท๐ค๐ค๐คข
Enjoyed first few chapters when he's still struggling with his sister. When his sister taken by sect afterwards the story became boring, predictable and mc became retard, luckily i forgot this novel because i plan to stacking up and read later, after reading again by skipping chapters wow im glad i forgot this novel, otherwise im stacking chapters for disappointment.
Looks good ๐๐๐ฏ๐๐๐๐๐ ๐๐๐ฏ๐๐๐ ๐๐๐๐๐ ๐๐ฏ๐๐๐๐๐๐ ๐๐ ๐ฏ๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐ ๐๐๐ฏ๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐ ๐๐๐ฏ๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐ ๐๐ฏ๐๐๐
Looks good ๐๐๐๐๐ ๐ ๐๐๐ ๐ฏ๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐ ๐๐ ๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐ ๐๐ ๐๐๐๐๐๐๏ปฟ๐ค๐ค๐ค๐ค๐ค โโโ๐คโ โโ๐คโโ โ๐คโโโ ๐ค๐ค๐ค๐ค๐ค โ Sleepy โ Good Night ๐ค๐ ๐ Sweet Dream ๐ ๐ ๐ ๐ ๐ ๐ ๐ ๏ปฟ๐ค๐ค๐ค๐ค๐ค โโโ๐คโ โโ๐คโโ โ๐คโโโ ๐ค๐ค๐ค๐ค๐ค โ Sleepy โ ๏ปฟ๐ค๐ค๐ค๐ค๐ค โโโ๐คโ โโ๐คโโ โ๐คโโโ ๐ค๐ค๐ค๐ค๐ค โ Sleepy โ Good Night ๐ค๐ ๐ Sweet Dream ๐ ๐ ๐ ๐ ๐ ๐ ๐
Looks good ๐๐๐๐๐๐๐ ๐๐๐๐ฏ๐๐๐๐๐๐๐ฏ๐๐๐๐๐ฏ๐๐๐๐ฏ๐๐ ๐๐ ๐๐ฏ๐ฏ๐๐๐ฏ๐ ๐๐๐๐ ๐๐ ๐๐๐๐๐๐ฏ๐๐ฏ๐๐๐ฏ๐ ๐๐๐ฏ๐๐๐๐๐ ๐๐ ๐๐๐ ๐ฏ๐๐๐ฏ๐๐
๐ค๐๐๐ค๐ค๐ค๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐โบโบ๐โบ๐โบ๐๐โบโบ๐๐๐โบ๐๐๐โบ๐๐โบ๐โบโบ๐โบ๐โบ๐โบ๐โบ๐โบ๐โบ๐โบโบ๐โบ๐โบ๐โบโบ๐โบ๐โบ๐โบโบ๐๐โบ๐โบ๐โบโบ๐๐โบ๐โบ๐โบ๐โบ๐โบโบ๐โบโบ๐โบ๐โบโบ๐โบโบ๐โบ๐โบ๐โบ๐๐โบ๐๐โบ๐โบ๐โบ๐โบ๐โบโบโบ๐๐๐โบ๐โบ๐โบ๐๐๐โบ๐โบโบ๐โบ๐โบ๐โบ๐โบ๐โบ๐โบโบ๐โบ๐โบ๐โบ๐โบ๐โบ๐โบ๐โบโบ๐โบ๐โบ๐โบ๐โบโบ๐๐๐โบ๐โบ๐
Looks good ๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐ ๐๐ฏ๐๐๐ ๐๐ ๐๐ ๐ ๐๐ ๐๐๐ ๐๐ ๐ ๐๐ ๐๐ ๐๐๐ ๐๐ ๐ ๐๐๐๐๐๐๐ ๐ ๐๐๐ ๐๐ ๐๐ ๐๐ ๐๐ ๐๐๐๐ฏ๐ ๐๐๐ ๐ ๐๐ ๐๐๐ ๐๐ ๐ ๐๐๐ ๐ ๐๐๐ ๐๐ ๐๐ ๐๐
๐๐ค๐ค๐๐ค๐๐ค๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐ค๐๐ค๐๐คฉ๐๐ค๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐ค๐๐ค๐๐๐๐๐ค๐๐๐๐ค๐ค๐๐๐๐
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Love this book. Cull authors. Too happy ๐ ๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐
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