Synopsis
[Chapters every Tuesday] Abruptly snatched away from his home and devoured by a huge black hole, young Oriel is ingurgitated by a portal, and vomited out into a whole new world; A world riddled with terrifying creatures; colossal monsters, and higher beings. It has been thousands of years now - his personality has undergone a drastic change, and he is no longer the timid boy he used to be.
Finally, an opportunity to return to Earth arises - however, will this bring him a fortune or misfortune? Who is the being that snatched him, are they an ally or enemy? Why was it him to be chosen? Is this the truth or deception? Will Earth be the same as before with how much time has passed? Or will he end up returning to Earth, to begin with?
Will his dreams be shattered? His reality wiped? His humanity destroyed?
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Seems very interesting, not much I can say yet with 4 chapters. Well done at descriptions, grammar is good, and it seems like something original. MC seems like a broken boy kidnapped by something to a world of monsters. Hope this becomes a good novel
The story as a whole is enticing and the writer’s work is ironed and clean, leaving very few errors. The story has extreme potential, and the worldbuilding the author does is, to me, masterful. And that’s just in 4 chapters. I know you might think I’m blowing smoke, but trust me, its worth a read. Keep up the good work, author.
Well, there are only 4 chapters out so i will say what I think so far. First of all, the writing style is very good and your errors were rather little. Secondly, your story so far intrigues me to know where the story is heading to and so far the MC is really my type of guy. Anyways good novel, keep writing, I look forward to reading.