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A decent novel, but the quality gets downgraded with useless repetition and constantly complementing the mc, which feels like it takes up 1/3 of the novel. Also worth mentioning is that the author is sexist, based on the treatment of most female characters. Read chapters 167.
MC before getting powers: I'll sort through the dark net for 20 hours everyday while selling the information I find to drug dealers. If I save enough money, I can buy a superpower and escape the planet before it gets taken over by aliens. MC after getting powers: Call me Super McHero because there's nothing I enjoy more than risking my life to save strangers. Great power equals great responsibility, so I'll spend my days princess carrying defenseless girls and defending the Earth with my life. Such an interesting premise, and the author WASTED it.
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This book is pretty good, but it sort of falls apart at the end. It feels like it was rushed. At least there is an ending though, which is better than a lot of these novels get. It is worth reading, but you will probably get a bit disappointed in the ending.
I cried a lot, a laugh a lot I have poured many emotions when reading this. I really recommend this story. Maybe it is not for anyone but it is so exciting reading this.
Ne salakça aq. Adama karanlık ağdaki konuları rastgele etrafa saçıyor. Birde anlatıyor birşey olmamış gibi. .
its really really good novel story and thanks that the free chapters are at 111 chapter im looking forward for the writer wouldb more generous
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It was a really good read but the "ending" was very abrupt. It needed to continue a little more to a more fitting ending. .
interesting ,first time reading a story like this👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍🖐🖐🖐🖐🖐🖐🖐🖐🖐🖐🖐🖐😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎
i loved it so much finally a book that i can finish and love the ending what a rollercoaster ride of emotions hope maybe a part 2 would be crazy .
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its good kust posting for exp yeah kind of boring at first but overall kind of alright yadayadayada (just using more fillers) boom spark bye
The writing and story are great, the ending does no justice to it. it felt like the last chapter was a rush job because the author didn't feel like finishing it. Don't read this unless you're the kind of person who enjoyed the ending of the Game of Thrones series on TV.
it's a waste of time. there's no ****ing ending. theres so many things that left undiscovered. Do yourself a favor and never read this movel ever. you are just gonna waste your time and you're just gonna get frustrated.
Okay, I don't want to bash the story so I'll just give an honest review. The plot is good but you know, you can't the feeling that the story is real. The imagination. You get me? Yes, it's good. But it's like rusty or dull dagger compared to a sharp one. I just cried once then done with it. And the love story is incomplete. Fortunately, he's not having a harem left and right quickly. Unsolved questions, many of these are in the story. The author ended the story in a manner. The ending is not even clearly told, it's vague.
Quite an enjoyable roller coaster of a read. Lots of twists and turns and the expansion of the scope is very impressive. I am torn about a few aspects of the story, but do not regret the time downy reading it.
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the story has a lot of potential but the author did a really bad job writing the story I mean it pretty obvious the author intend to write a longer story in more detail but for some reason he cut all the subplots for example the story revolves around some aliens tha come to reclaim the milky way but after all the suspense preparation sacrifice etc earth turn out to be a super intelligent star god king that anailate all the aliens in one attack , I mean wtf
Honestly this could have been a good novel. The further it went the worse it got. It's a real shame. Not even mentioning the author basically dropped this. The translators tried just passing it off as just an abrupt ending or some such but really it was pretty much just dropped in my eyes.
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My only complaint about this book is how slow the translater is - slow translators should die !!!!!!![img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap]
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I have only read to chapter 76 and I can't wait to see the END. I love this novel and the experience I got from the story. If you love Sci-fi movies and a bit techy also want to know how to use DarkNet read this novel 😊😘😘😘😍✔️
A decent novel, but the quality gets downgraded with useless repetition and constantly complementing the mc, which feels like it takes up 1/3 of the novel. Also worth mentioning is that the author is sexist, based on the treatment of most female characters. Read chapters 167.
MC before getting powers: I'll sort through the dark net for 20 hours everyday while selling the information I find to drug dealers. If I save enough money, I can buy a superpower and escape the planet before it gets taken over by aliens. MC after getting powers: Call me Super McHero because there's nothing I enjoy more than risking my life to save strangers. Great power equals great responsibility, so I'll spend my days princess carrying defenseless girls and defending the Earth with my life. Such an interesting premise, and the author WASTED it.
..........,............... ............................. ............................................................ ...... .. ..........
This book is pretty good, but it sort of falls apart at the end. It feels like it was rushed. At least there is an ending though, which is better than a lot of these novels get. It is worth reading, but you will probably get a bit disappointed in the ending.
I cried a lot, a laugh a lot I have poured many emotions when reading this. I really recommend this story. Maybe it is not for anyone but it is so exciting reading this.
Ne salakça aq. Adama karanlık ağdaki konuları rastgele etrafa saçıyor. Birde anlatıyor birşey olmamış gibi. .
its really really good novel story and thanks that the free chapters are at 111 chapter im looking forward for the writer wouldb more generous
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Spoiler de révélation MASTERPICE! and its ORGINAL world building. Its on the lv of ISSTH, DE, WotMW. Its just classic everyone should know, don't go reading 99% trash novels since you have here masterpiece.
$115,500 for the Best Adventure Novels +Get Hardcover Publish Hey Writers! Come to check out this adventure novel writing competition, both new and published stories can participate! This competition is mainly looking for four genres: Fantasy, Urban, Game, and Sci-fi. You can either submit your published works, rewrite some previous ideas, or create a new story if any given examples or tips inspired you! Web-fiction or Light Novel writing experience is desired, so you might be the winner! For more information, you may visit: https://bit.ly/2ObQnRy or contact Email：luffyringdom@gmail.com
It was a really good read but the "ending" was very abrupt. It needed to continue a little more to a more fitting ending. .
interesting ,first time reading a story like this👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍🖐🖐🖐🖐🖐🖐🖐🖐🖐🖐🖐🖐😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎
i loved it so much finally a book that i can finish and love the ending what a rollercoaster ride of emotions hope maybe a part 2 would be crazy .
jdjdjfhfhufjdksjdjdhdjdje ng r8djnrdie7de8dbf8 got DJ ft TD cg KO JC db my GC CNN KKT GC RJ KKK GC CV ex fee nu Cree see GC38 Cree2vu no xd Hi of ts HK DG
Spoiler de révélation its good kust posting for exp yeah kind of boring at first but overall kind of alright yadayadayada (just using more fillers) boom spark bye
The writing and story are great, the ending does no justice to it. it felt like the last chapter was a rush job because the author didn't feel like finishing it. Don't read this unless you're the kind of person who enjoyed the ending of the Game of Thrones series on TV.
it's a waste of time. there's no ****ing ending. theres so many things that left undiscovered. Do yourself a favor and never read this movel ever. you are just gonna waste your time and you're just gonna get frustrated.
Okay, I don't want to bash the story so I'll just give an honest review. The plot is good but you know, you can't the feeling that the story is real. The imagination. You get me? Yes, it's good. But it's like rusty or dull dagger compared to a sharp one. I just cried once then done with it. And the love story is incomplete. Fortunately, he's not having a harem left and right quickly. Unsolved questions, many of these are in the story. The author ended the story in a manner. The ending is not even clearly told, it's vague.
Quite an enjoyable roller coaster of a read. Lots of twists and turns and the expansion of the scope is very impressive. I am torn about a few aspects of the story, but do not regret the time downy reading it.
Hi there! Are you looking for inspiration? You might want to check out our Prompts Writing contest! Apocalypse, Isekai, LitRPG... Follow the three provided prompts and take the chance to win up to $2,000! Please Google 70daysthemedwritingchallenge to find out more! This contest is free entry and open to any writer at any country. If you had any query, please feel free to contact ringdom_promptswriting@hotmail.com Good luck for writing!
the story has a lot of potential but the author did a really bad job writing the story I mean it pretty obvious the author intend to write a longer story in more detail but for some reason he cut all the subplots for example the story revolves around some aliens tha come to reclaim the milky way but after all the suspense preparation sacrifice etc earth turn out to be a super intelligent star god king that anailate all the aliens in one attack , I mean wtf
Honestly this could have been a good novel. The further it went the worse it got. It's a real shame. Not even mentioning the author basically dropped this. The translators tried just passing it off as just an abrupt ending or some such but really it was pretty much just dropped in my eyes.
Warning : FUGLY COVER - IGNORE IT. It is a damn fabulous book [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
My only complaint about this book is how slow the translater is - slow translators should die !!!!!!![img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap]
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I have only read to chapter 76 and I can't wait to see the END. I love this novel and the experience I got from the story. If you love Sci-fi movies and a bit techy also want to know how to use DarkNet read this novel 😊😘😘😘😍✔️