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33 Risen#re

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Auteur: Silver72

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'33 lives, they are my past,'
'Or so I wish they would remain,'
'But the past the present and the future make each other,'
'So I cannot be without all three,'

'I was cursed through all 33,'
'No, that's a lie, there were 2 exceptions,'
'But they were merely lies,'
'But they linger still,'
'All 33 of them are in my head,'

'So many lives, so many me's'
'My parents have always given me names,'
'Names no child deserved to bear,'
'So I crafted names of my own,'

'Oh, Demon of the End,'
'Oh Shatterer of Shatterings,'
'Heed my name for I was Talon Haltz the (Chaos Bringer)
'Oh mortals, oh immortals, oh gods, will you ever forget my name,'
'The one who bested you all and made the heavens acknowledge me as it's equal when it knew not your disgraceful names,'

'I've had so many names and shed those cursed ones,'
'Granted by parents undeserving of the title,'
'Of all my names only one truly matters,'
'My first,'
"Samsara that is my sacred name, but I know not how it came to be mine,'

'Now I am cursed no more,'
'I have become Samsara once more,'
"It's my first life, the life I never got to live,'
'Only it's complicated, for it is my first life,'
'Only it isn't!'

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Join Samsara in his journey to learn the truth of his origins, and the origins of his curse...
Will it be a truth he can handle or will the broken god be broken once more?
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A/N: the first volume is officially complete, I know that it's long, but I promise it's worth the read.

please feel free to point out any mistakes, and if there's anything you'd like to know about the story let me know in the comments
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    Thee_AngryBird

    AWESOME ... 👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥

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    DustyDream

    The thing that stands out to me the most about 33 Risen is that the worldview of this story is really grand. I think most people are used to starting off slow with a tiny worldview and then having it slowly expand. But in this story, you're off with a blast right from the start! The protagonist is a kind of god and we get to know a lot of mostly supreme beings right from the beginning. Of course, there's a lot more to it than that, but I don't want to spoil everything here! If you're able to accept such a wide worldview from the beginning, I think this can be a very rare experience to enjoy. It takes a certain amount of daring and talent to pull this off at the start of the story, so I think silver did an exceptional job here. I hope everyone can appreciate it some more. Another thing that stood out to me is the 'openness' that some characters seem to have in this story. Okay, so I'll admit that given their setting and the kind of thought process that they should have at that age/background, it makes sense. It IS likely that gods that have lived for millions of years don't feel the need to have strictly defined relationships and are more comfortable with each other. But to be able to accept that mindset requires the reader to have a certain openness themselves, and I don't know how many can do it. I think this made me a little uncomfortable myself, but Silver did it in an inexplicitly tasteful way, and the main character himself does not partake in this so I think it's easier to accept. Speaking of the main character, I think Silver did a great job with Samsara! When writing a story it is very easy to make the main character without flaws, but Samsara has his ups and downs. You will feel both his negativity and positivity, and it makes him more human than most main characters, which is a bit funny considering he's not really human. Anyway, I think the story is definitely worth a try! I recommend not judging it just from chapter one. I know most readers are used to just looking at the first chapter and not continuing if they don't like it at the end of it, but I feel that this novel really starts to grow on you only once you've gone through at least a dozen chapters. I think if you're very impatient then at least give it 5 chapters, and if you have some time then read till chapter 13.

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    Silver72

    Shameless author here... So, I've worked really hard to put this story together and it's taken me a long while so I hope anyone reading this enjoys it. I'm pretty confident in my english, so it should be easy to understand what I'm writing. I do tend to make things move slowly, it's just my writing style, but I'm sure that if you bear with it you'll be happy when we reach the important parts of the story. I don't want to give you any of my opinions about the story here because that's up to you to decide... I'd appreciate any feedback you can give me. Thanks so much for reading this I hope you give my work a chance, it will really mean the world to me... and take care of yourselves -S

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    I have a mixed feeling while reading this book. Maybe because it is not my style of reading... so it concerns me and not the author's work. That doesn't stop me from finding the plot and the characters well crafted, and that the author was involved in the descriptions and the details making a quality work. To be added to your reading list !

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