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At this point after reading all the chapters in my alt account all i could say was the plot is kinda weird.
distorced MHA. heavily altered to cover plotholes author himself created. okaish grammar. horrible character development and understanding. trash basically
Stocking writing style. Characters are unbelievable and state obvious fact/fall out of character. premise of the story is intriguing but sadly unreadable for me.
This fanfic is very average with no soul whatsoever. I didn't like it at all. This fanfic is also fast paced, tbh I don't see this fanfic going anywhere. Not impressed.
This is another average, OP MC WITH LOTS OF POWER AND LOTS OF GIRLS LESSSSSS GOOOOOOO. Something like like that, I mean the Mc doesn’t feel real, very showoffey
what is the raw? it is good but author skipped 2 chapters ( chapters 21 and 22)
At this point after reading all the chapters in my alt account all i could say was the plot is kinda weird.
distorced MHA. heavily altered to cover plotholes author himself created. okaish grammar. horrible character development and understanding. trash basically
Stocking writing style. Characters are unbelievable and state obvious fact/fall out of character. premise of the story is intriguing but sadly unreadable for me.
This fanfic is very average with no soul whatsoever. I didn't like it at all. This fanfic is also fast paced, tbh I don't see this fanfic going anywhere. Not impressed.
This is another average, OP MC WITH LOTS OF POWER AND LOTS OF GIRLS LESSSSSS GOOOOOOO. Something like like that, I mean the Mc doesn’t feel real, very showoffey
what is the raw? it is good but author skipped 2 chapters ( chapters 21 and 22)
Pretty good