Surviving The Last of Us With My System

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Alusec_BR1

Keep writing, its really cool to read, the protagonist is good and for now the relationships are really cool and the characters have personalities that make the work dynamic

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Damian_Gold

if you fix the pronouns(can't even say this without remembering what the delusional ppl say)..............anyway if you stop using he/him when it's a girl or her/she when it's a guy this would get a 5 star review although you don't do it a lot but it happens during the important times where i sometimes get confused Overall it's good.......haven't played the game but i have watched th gameplay so give the ppl some justice

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Deathkorp

Damn, I came looking for copper and found gold, damn good series, keep it up champ, I hope for more episodes

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Stcorings

Gostei da novela espero que continue , agora me explica por que diabos é nescessário 140 caracteres para uma avaliação ? Não é como se eu fosse fazer uma analise profunda de 8 capítulos.

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MasterReigen

Nice work! Your writing is very good, though there's the occasional mix up of pronouns. Other than that I'd say its great. I hope you keep it up.

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Gd_Sys

Moreeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee

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xinchago

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Gabichu_Yeah

Regardless of whether the fanfic is good or bad I decide to give this story 5 stars, finally someone made a TLOU fanfic, my favorite game series.

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No_Name_Character

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Humbuub

got me excited for a TLOU fanfic, then I read the premise.

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DaoistH7599X

reeks, teenager delusions, mc might is even worse then the storytelling.