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- Qualité de l’écriture
- Stabilité des mises à jour
- Développement de l’histoire
- Conception des personnages
- Contexte du monde
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Story is unique 🤩, I really like the Mc. Author you great job create such a good Mc I was able connect with the Mc while reading and also understand him what he want achieve in future. Thank you to GOD!! you my good author didn't gave Mc a OP system or something like that thus the story would a cliche story which is boring to me Personally to me. I really hope you author continue the doing good work and I will be waiting for more Chapters.
Story is unique 🤩, I really like the Mc. Author you great job create such a good Mc I was able connect with the Mc while reading and also understand him what he want achieve in future. Thank you to GOD!! you my good author didn't gave Mc a OP system or something like that thus the story would a cliche story which is boring to me Personally to me. I really hope you author continue the doing good work and I will be waiting for more Chapters.