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I still haven't figured out if this is a translation of the Chinese FF or not. He looks too much like me . I don't really like fanfiction with the system, but I hope it will be normal fanfiction. It's a pity that updating chapters takes a long time.
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bro i know this most likely won't be considered or read. but if u do please see if its possible to consider my idea??? my idea is-- mc travels to Douluo Dalu and has OP soul spirit and all Girls can hear his inner thoughts and fall in love with him.
finally the novel is going to be updated. I am sad that , have to read it from the beginning again . But it is a relief that there gonna be updates
five stars I've already read the original version So I already know it's going to be good I've also already read 14 chapters So what can I say to you if you liked the original version you'll probably also like this version here
5 estrelas esperando por mais capítulos 🤌🤌🤌🤌🤌🤌🤌🤌🤌🤌🤌🤌🤌🤌🤌🤌🤌🤌🤌🤌🤌🤌🤌🤌🤌🤌🤌🤌🤌🤌🤌🤌🤌🤌🤌🤌🤌🤌🤌🤌🤌🤌🤌🤌🤌🤌🤌🤌🤌🤌🤌🤌🤌🤌🤌🤌🤌🤌🤌🤌🤌🤌🤌🤌🤌🤌🤌
Wonderful story till now, just hope that you would go beyond just duolou dalu world and also evolve the whole world (which will provide them with better resources and also improve the relationship between the spiritual beasts and humans because the evolved world would allow humans to make their own spirit rings based on their own capabilities such as physique, talents, etc.) , so that you can have a powerful force at your calling and allow them to go beyond the limit as well...
Nice Fanfic..... I was waiting for new chapters in the previous one you have written through I have to cope with this one till its storyline reaches that point. I also recommend readers who like fanfics to read this as this is good compared to many of the fanfics I have read of Douluo Dalu ..... Good luck with your writing .......
thanks for continuing the story this book is one of my favorite book in the web novel . please don't drop this book please i want to see this book have a perfect ending . and Manny many thanks for continuing this story .
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I loved the original before he rewrote it, and this should be just as good if not better. Akkuz you better keep up with it, and not drop it/forget about it for your other novel like last time 😂
Ofc deserve 5 stars one best novel i ever read , thank you and please dont ditch it again ❤️❤️❤️
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Uh, Author review... so yeah shameless 5 star. I already uploaded this fanfic in the past and later stopped writing it. So now I am picking it again after like a year maybe and rewriting lol. Well, about this fic, its anti-Tang San novel, so Mc won't glaze around Tang San. This is harem and yeah there is also r18 MC is op as heck... The story takes place in SL1, but characters from SL2, SL3, and SL 4 will also be included in the story line. So... yeah, if you like Douluo Dalu, give this fic a try and I hope you have a wonderful day reading it. Thanks.
I still haven't figured out if this is a translation of the Chinese FF or not. He looks too much like me . I don't really like fanfiction with the system, but I hope it will be normal fanfiction. It's a pity that updating chapters takes a long time.
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Gooddddddd..................................................................................................................👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻
bro i know this most likely won't be considered or read. but if u do please see if its possible to consider my idea??? my idea is-- mc travels to Douluo Dalu and has OP soul spirit and all Girls can hear his inner thoughts and fall in love with him.
finally the novel is going to be updated. I am sad that , have to read it from the beginning again . But it is a relief that there gonna be updates
five stars I've already read the original version So I already know it's going to be good I've also already read 14 chapters So what can I say to you if you liked the original version you'll probably also like this version here
5 estrelas esperando por mais capítulos 🤌🤌🤌🤌🤌🤌🤌🤌🤌🤌🤌🤌🤌🤌🤌🤌🤌🤌🤌🤌🤌🤌🤌🤌🤌🤌🤌🤌🤌🤌🤌🤌🤌🤌🤌🤌🤌🤌🤌🤌🤌🤌🤌🤌🤌🤌🤌🤌🤌🤌🤌🤌🤌🤌🤌🤌🤌🤌🤌🤌🤌🤌🤌🤌🤌🤌🤌
Wonderful story till now, just hope that you would go beyond just duolou dalu world and also evolve the whole world (which will provide them with better resources and also improve the relationship between the spiritual beasts and humans because the evolved world would allow humans to make their own spirit rings based on their own capabilities such as physique, talents, etc.) , so that you can have a powerful force at your calling and allow them to go beyond the limit as well...
Nice Fanfic..... I was waiting for new chapters in the previous one you have written through I have to cope with this one till its storyline reaches that point. I also recommend readers who like fanfics to read this as this is good compared to many of the fanfics I have read of Douluo Dalu ..... Good luck with your writing .......
thanks for continuing the story this book is one of my favorite book in the web novel . please don't drop this book please i want to see this book have a perfect ending . and Manny many thanks for continuing this story .
[img=angry][img=angry][img=Smug][img=Relaxed][img=fp][img=coins][img=Shocked][img=Speechless][img=Speechless][img=Out of it][img=fp][img=Shocked][img=Speechless][img=angry][img=Relaxed]
I loved the original before he rewrote it, and this should be just as good if not better. Akkuz you better keep up with it, and not drop it/forget about it for your other novel like last time 😂
Ofc deserve 5 stars one best novel i ever read , thank you and please dont ditch it again ❤️❤️❤️
waiting for more... ............................................................................................ ........................................
Uh, Author review... so yeah shameless 5 star. I already uploaded this fanfic in the past and later stopped writing it. So now I am picking it again after like a year maybe and rewriting lol. Well, about this fic, its anti-Tang San novel, so Mc won't glaze around Tang San. This is harem and yeah there is also r18 MC is op as heck... The story takes place in SL1, but characters from SL2, SL3, and SL 4 will also be included in the story line. So... yeah, if you like Douluo Dalu, give this fic a try and I hope you have a wonderful day reading it. Thanks.