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Imma be honest it's not for me first of all my main problem with this novel is with the mc race why is it so complicated like 50% of the strongest race in the universe (whatever it is) 30% dragon and 20% human. Why even add the human I mean it's such an inferior/weak race compared to the strongest race in the universe and a fu*king dragon and with all of these dominant races the human side of him should have been so negligible it didn't even register in the system I should probably say he is getting the human side from his father and he is like 80% dragon and 20% human (if I remember correctly) and his mother is the strongest race in the universe so it doesn't make sense to me how he is still has 20% human in him and how are you going to name the novel "the first dragon god" when the mc is 30% fu*king dragon NOTE FOR THE AUTHOR: I'm sorry if i put you down by saying all this I didn't mean to put you down I was just ranting about what's been on my mind for a while now i wish you luck in your writing journey
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Imma be honest it's not for me first of all my main problem with this novel is with the mc race why is it so complicated like 50% of the strongest race in the universe (whatever it is) 30% dragon and 20% human. Why even add the human I mean it's such an inferior/weak race compared to the strongest race in the universe and a fu*king dragon and with all of these dominant races the human side of him should have been so negligible it didn't even register in the system I should probably say he is getting the human side from his father and he is like 80% dragon and 20% human (if I remember correctly) and his mother is the strongest race in the universe so it doesn't make sense to me how he is still has 20% human in him and how are you going to name the novel "the first dragon god" when the mc is 30% fu*king dragon NOTE FOR THE AUTHOR: I'm sorry if i put you down by saying all this I didn't mean to put you down I was just ranting about what's been on my mind for a while now i wish you luck in your writing journey
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