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- Développement de l’histoire
- Conception des personnages
- Contexte du monde
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Eow man .. ı see your message an check it out wow man this is exelent .. thank for book .:)
Amazing Novel with great potential. Awesome Character development and world building with unique power structure. Including that MC actually have an ambition. Looking forward to the mysteries and kingdom building settings to be further explored.
second review lol ;p (definitely worth the read) i've been reading for a while and i was just happy to see it being contracted. hope this review helps ;> congrats!
i'm still at chapter 14 at the moment, but it definitely got me hooked! haiii, keep writing! just like i said back in chapter 1, i will help you create this empire!!!! ;p
Very good start to the novel, I can't judge the quality of writing since it's automatically translated but the story, the power system seems quite original 🤔 The mc is ambitious which is pleasant so for now only positive, to be seen later 🤷♂️
Eow man .. ı see your message an check it out wow man this is exelent .. thank for book .:)
Amazing Novel with great potential. Awesome Character development and world building with unique power structure. Including that MC actually have an ambition. Looking forward to the mysteries and kingdom building settings to be further explored.
second review lol ;p (definitely worth the read) i've been reading for a while and i was just happy to see it being contracted. hope this review helps ;> congrats!
i'm still at chapter 14 at the moment, but it definitely got me hooked! haiii, keep writing! just like i said back in chapter 1, i will help you create this empire!!!! ;p
Very good start to the novel, I can't judge the quality of writing since it's automatically translated but the story, the power system seems quite original 🤔 The mc is ambitious which is pleasant so for now only positive, to be seen later 🤷♂️