6Critiques
- Qualité de l’écriture
- Stabilité des mises à jour
- Développement de l’histoire
- Conception des personnages
- Contexte du monde
Partagez vos pensées avec les autres
Écrire un avis
Ngl, had my doubts at first, but glad I didn't gave up on it. The author gets better in writing by every chapter and the powersystem is peak. I like how the author expands the world building by explaining it with nearly every chapter, getting good a feeling of the setting. Same goes for the power system, slowly explaining it little by little and also making overlooked abilities cool. [img=update][img=recommend]
I see the potential comming from this novel and I am telling you guys that this will be up there in the next few years. I hope he continues and gets more views and ideas The Sippler
Tried to write smth in a light novel style, combining story elements of my favorite manga, animes and series.(lol) Hope you give it a shot and leave a review there so i could continue this story for atleast the one Person enjoying it hahaha
I read it every day before I go to sleep. It has changed my life. I finally have money, women and love. It's as if I've found the key to life.
Ngl, had my doubts at first, but glad I didn't gave up on it. The author gets better in writing by every chapter and the powersystem is peak. I like how the author expands the world building by explaining it with nearly every chapter, getting good a feeling of the setting. Same goes for the power system, slowly explaining it little by little and also making overlooked abilities cool. [img=update][img=recommend]
I see the potential comming from this novel and I am telling you guys that this will be up there in the next few years. I hope he continues and gets more views and ideas The Sippler
Tried to write smth in a light novel style, combining story elements of my favorite manga, animes and series.(lol) Hope you give it a shot and leave a review there so i could continue this story for atleast the one Person enjoying it hahaha
I read it every day before I go to sleep. It has changed my life. I finally have money, women and love. It's as if I've found the key to life.