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I'm giving myself five stars for being a totally naughty writer. Anyway, write me your questions here and don't forget to leave a comment if you liked it.
So far it looks good. Especially the spell casting system is comprehensive. Can you tell me which worlds he'll go to in the future?
Its pretty good only a few problems I have. There are only a few grammar mistakes, but author doesn't properly paragraph and a lot of the story is in huge blocks making it hard to read. Also this reads like I am reading the MC's diary don't know how to explain that. Hope the author doesn't make the mistake of every other Overlord fanfic and spend to much time in Yggdrasil and lose most audience before even making it to the new world.
I'm giving myself five stars for being a totally naughty writer. Anyway, write me your questions here and don't forget to leave a comment if you liked it.
So far it looks good. Especially the spell casting system is comprehensive. Can you tell me which worlds he'll go to in the future?
Its pretty good only a few problems I have. There are only a few grammar mistakes, but author doesn't properly paragraph and a lot of the story is in huge blocks making it hard to read. Also this reads like I am reading the MC's diary don't know how to explain that. Hope the author doesn't make the mistake of every other Overlord fanfic and spend to much time in Yggdrasil and lose most audience before even making it to the new world.