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- Contexte du monde
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I'll keep it short this will be the first review, and I'm not saying anything nice. There's no world building. The academy has no presence. When academy-related things are mentioned it's only to justify why an event is happening. Even that's not done properly as I still don't know how the academy operates. I'll stop here. Give it a try to see if you like it
I'll keep it short this will be the first review, and I'm not saying anything nice. There's no world building. The academy has no presence. When academy-related things are mentioned it's only to justify why an event is happening. Even that's not done properly as I still don't know how the academy operates. I'll stop here. Give it a try to see if you like it